随着天气的升温,高考离我们也越来越近了,在考试中作文一直都是一个重点得分项目,那么我们该如何写好作文呢?今天小编给大家带来了2018年高考英语写作高分技巧(议论文)。
一、文体概述
利弊分析类书面表达往往是对某种事物的利弊进行对比,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度或对事物前景提出预测。通常包括以下内容:说明事物现状→事物本身的利弊→你对现状或前景的看法。该类文体一般使用一般现在时,也可根据实际情况使用相应的时态。
二、必备短语
1. positive aspects 积极方面
2. negative aspects 消极方面
3. in conclusion 总而言之
4. be beneficial to... 对……有益
5. do harm to / be harmful to 对……有害
6. through the above analysis 通过以上分析
7. in my opinion/as far as I am concerned 就我而言
8. the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages 利远远大于弊
9.have positive/ negative effects on... 对……产生有利/不利的影响
10. play an important/a significant role/part in在……中起重要作用
三、套用句式
1. Generally, its advantages can be seensted as follows. 通常它有如下的优点。
2. It is obvious that the disadvantages are much more than advantages. 很显然,弊远大于利。
3. Just as a saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, and this is no exception. 正如常言所说“任何东西都有两面”,这也不例外。
4. Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. 现在很多人偏向于A因为它在我们日常生活中起重要作用。
5. Through the above analysis, I believed that the positive aspects overweight/far overweight the negative ones. 通过以上分析,我相信积极方面远远大于消极方面。
四、习作修改
(下列范文中共有10处错误,每句最多两处,请改正)
With the development of society, more and more people have money and time for travelling. Travelling is the very good activity. When we are tiring of our work or study, we may travel in our spare time to breathe the fresh air, enjoy the beauty of nature or the charms of other cities and build up our bodies.
But sometime, travelling is something not very much comfortable. The weather changes a lot, and we may get sick easy. The worst of all is that you may have my money stolen or get injured. Of course, travelling was a waste of time and money.
So in my opinion, we should make full preparations for the travel, get the informations about the weather, try to go with a fellow traveler so that you can take care each other, and avoid any accidents.
五、课堂练习
现在越来越多的人使用微信(Wechat)作为交流平台,微信有它的利弊。请写一篇短文谈谈你对微信的看法。 要点如下:
1.优点:使用时免费,方便快捷;
2.缺点:个人信息可能会被泄露;当面交流的机会变少;
3.你的观点。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头语已为你写好。
Nowadays, Wechat is becoming increasingly fashionable and popular.
六、课外作业
现在越来越多的学生带手机上学,手机作为一种通讯工具,固然有它的优点也有它的缺点,请写一篇短文谈谈你对中学生使用手机的看法。 要点如下:
1. 手机的优点:联系方便。
2. 手机的缺点:分散学习注意力。
3. 你对中学生使用手机的态度。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
Nowadays more and more students carry mobile phones to school. In my opinion, there’ re both advantages and disadvantages for students to carry mobile phones.
参考答案与范文:
习作修改
本文是一篇关于旅游的利与弊的文章。
1.the→a 意思是“旅游是一项很好的活动”,表示“一项”用a。
2.tiring→tired此处人作主语,be tired of为固定搭配,意为“厌烦”。
3.or→and 因“大自然的美”和“城市的魅力”应为并列关系,而非选择关系。
4.sometime→sometimes 根据句意可知,此处表示“有时”,用sometimes。
5.把very后的much去掉 因very much修饰动词;这里是修饰形容词comfortable。
6.easy→easily 修饰动词get,应用副词形式。
7.my→your 因该句主语是you,应将my改为your前后人称才一致。
8.was→is 全文用的是一般现在时,故was也应改用一般现在时is。
9.informations→information 因information为不可数名词,没有复数形式。
10.在care后加of 因take care of为固定搭配,意为“照顾”。
课堂练习
Nowadays, Wechat is becoming increasingly popular. Generally speaking, its advantages can be seen as follows. First, we use it for free and can save money. Second, it’s convenient for us to communicate with our friends everywhere and at any time. Furthermore, Wechat is to the taste of the majority of people. Its attractive interface and various functions are loved wildly.
However, problems exist meanwhile. Firstly, our identity can be revealed when we use Wechat. As a result, we can be in trouble. Moreover, it may make communicating with others face to face less. To make the matter worse, relationship could break down.
In my views, though Wechat has improved our lives, it should be used properly. We shouldn’t lose ourselves.
课外作业
Nowadays more and more students carry mobile phones to school. In my opinion, there’ re both advantages and disadvantages for students to carry mobile phones. Mobile phones can help students keep in touch with their family and friends when necessary. It is convenient for students if there is emergency. However, there are some problems with using mobile phones. Some students focus too much attention on chatting and sending messages, which affects their studies in a way. What’s more, sometimes the ring and shake of mobile phones also distract their attention in class. Besides, for students, using mobile phones costs too much and it will give their parents extra burden. In my opinion, it’s better for students not to carry mobile phones with them to school in order to learn intently.
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