大学英语专业四级写作总结

大学英语专业四级写作总结

首先说说专四作文第一篇作文的结构：

1.第一部分引出话题，摆明立场。个人观点一定要鲜明，不可模棱两可，也不要中立。是

就是，不是就不是。赞成就赞成，反对就反对。

2.第二部分陈述你的观点，用两个或三个例子来支撑你的论点，要解释为什么，并简要提

出解决办法。段首要有中心句。主题和重点要突出。有些同学写作时比较容易跑题，引用例子和陈述观点时要注意扣题。注意Onetopic,oneparagraph.中间陈述观点的两个方面可以分开两个段来写，也可合为一段写。建议大家在考试时分两段，这是Aden的批改习惯。

3.第三部分回应你在第一部分的观点，对话题做一个小小的总结。回应第一段时句子不要

单纯复制第一段陈述观点的句子，应用另一种语言来restateyourtwotopicsentences.

国家专四写作考试要求第一篇作文字数为200左右，但Aden平时布置作业习惯是150字左右的，所以大家在考试时写150字左右就可以了，若写不出那么多东西，也要起码120字。期末考试时间为一个小时，有足够的时间给大家写作文，所以请大家写作文时细心点、耐心点，认真点写，想清楚了再写，尽量避免低级语法错误和避免表达不清。考试的形式就和我们考专四作文的形式一样，给出一个话题你，然后写作文。考试不难的，且Aden挺好人的，他也不想大家挂科，大家不用太担心考试的难度。考试时你若提早写完作文可以提早离开，但不要太早，最好起码过了40分钟再走吧。到时考试时若你很想那么早走就自己跟Aden说吧。

以下我为大家总结的写作常犯错误不仅仅是为了考试的，大家以后写英文作文时若犯了较多错误可以看看。当然，大家看了以下常犯错误后也不用太紧张，在写作时若有太多顾虑，太束缚自己又不好了，总结常犯错误我只是想提醒下大家。

其次，简要总结下同学在写作中常犯的错误：

一、句子：

1.…thereasonwhy…isbecause…

Reason和because在同一个句子中出现，意义重复了，应删掉because2.Then…Also…Besides…So…

以上四个词英语中是不把它们放在句首的，而是把它们放在句中的：…,then...…,also...…,besides...…,so...

3.流水句，不经意间将两个相互独立的分句直接用逗号连接，而不使用平行连词或其他适

当的连接手段。如：SanFranciscoisaverycosmopolitancity,therearepeoplefrommanyculturesandethnicgroupslivingthere.

改正这类错误，最直接的最简单的改法就是增加连接词，通常为and或but，但有时硬硬地加and和but会使语意不是很连贯。使用连接手段应该根据语意、两个分句之间的联系等情况使用句号、分号或平行连词（and,but等）、主从连词（although,because等）。4.Itis…

这一句型表达的意思通常是很模糊的，因为it可以指很多东西，所以在英文写作中要尽量避免使用Itis…句型，除非你写itis…这一句前面有非常清楚的指代，让人不用思考就知道it指的是什么。5.Suchas…andsoon…

在英文中suchas和andsoon是不可用在同一句中的，因为这两个词组用在同一句中的会造成语义重复。6.中国式英语

这是一个令我们许多人纠结的问题，我们要写的专四作文要求不是很高，大家在表达时尽量不要弄得太复杂，简单明了就行了，许多我们中国人特有的语言如“提高了国际形象”等应尽量避免。

7.句子成分不完整

如：Forexample,theincreaseinthecostofrentinganapartment.Manypeoplewhogetmarriedbeforetheyarematureenough.

这个句子细看一下，大家可以发现这两个个句子没有谓语。forexample后面引出的例子是完整的一个例子，要用完整的句子来表述。还有，forexample在作文中用一次就够了，不宜用太多次。第一句要重新加上谓语，如：Forexample,theincreaseinthecostofrentinganapartmenthasincreased。Who后面的是定语从句，修饰manypeople,是一个从属分句，在这句中把who去掉就可以了。8.Thereis/are…

这个句型也可造成表达不清，大家应尽量避免。还有，大家用这个句型比较经常犯一个错误：Therearemanystudentsreadbooksinthelibrary.这个句子有两个谓语了，所以为避免这种错误这个句型应尽量避免。

二、词组

cultureatmosphere(x)culturalatmosphere

economy’sdevelopment(x)economicdevelopmentdevelopeconomy(x)developtheeconomy

doharmtoenvironment(x)doharmtotheenvironment

spendsomethingtosomething(x)spendsomethingonsomething/in(doing)somethingprotectnature(x)protectthenaturethesociety(x)society

inourlife(x)ineverydaylife

concernsth/sb(x)beconcernedaboutsth(常用)/showconcernaboutsth/concernoneselfwithsth

notonlylikesthbutalso(x)likenotonlysthbutalso

Chinagovernment/China’sgovernment/theChinagovernment(x)Chinesegovernmentthestandardoflivinghasbeenimproved(x)thestandardoflivinghasimproved

alotapples(x)alotofapples/lotsofapples注意：在英语中alot通常是用于修饰程度等的副词词组，如Thanksalot.非常感谢。alotof和lotsof才是修饰名词的，可数和不可数的均可。

livingstandard-standardofliving(better)

oursociety/school/library/study/imaginationsociety/theschool/thelibrary/thestudent’sstudy/thestudent’simagination

注意：our在英语中是指somethingshared,在英文作文中用our范围太笼统了、太广了，应

尽量避免在写英文作文时用它。

除了个别习惯搭配外，为了使英文文章简单、清晰，写作文时应尽量避免用过多介词，如说thedevelopmentoftheeconomy，不如说economicdevelopment好。withthedevelopmentofsocietyassocietydevelops(better)表达：

景点：ascenicspot/scenicspots小结：

1．because指直接、明了的、有根据的原因，可放在句首或句中；for表推测的原因，不一

定成立，语气最弱，常放在句中；since指几乎大家都知道的原因，意为“既然”，可放在句首或句中。在使用这三个词时切勿乱用。

2．写作时要尽量避免用人称代词，因为它们太口语化，显得考试的作文不够正式，且在作

文中容易导致指代不明。

3．不要用many修饰不可数名词，不要用much修饰可数名词

4．尽量避免用it指代事物，因为it可以指代很多东西，虽然你知道it是指什么，但改卷

老师和读者并不清楚，他们要看it前面的甚至全文的内容才可能知道it指代什么，所以要避免。

5．尽量不要把介词或介词词组放在句首。6．尽量避免用our。

7．关于作文中用得太多让人看了无聊的词组(请见PDF文件TransitionPhrases（过渡短语）)：atthesametimemeanwhile/simultaneously/followedbynowadaysrecently/presently/currently(better)first,second,thirdfirst,next,finallyrightawayimmediately

inconclusiontherefore/thus/consequently/insummary/inbriefinadditionfurthermore/moreover/additionallyhoweverwhereas/nevertheless

在此给大家一个网址看看中国学生写英文作文方面存在的问题。

我们专四那本书的108页至123页有不少例文，并且例文里有评价和指出我们中国学生写英文作文常犯的一些错误，建议大家看看，充分利用下我们手上有的资源。

附：7篇专四写作例文

1.ItPaystobeHonest

Asthesocietyisbecomingmorecommercialized,itseemsthatprofitandinterestarethevitalimportantfactorsoflife.Inordertogetsuccess,somepeoplecheatothers.However,itpaystobehonestifyouwanttogetagoodrelationshipwithotherandwinapermanentreputation.

Firstandforemost,honestyisavirtuethatcanhelpyouacquiregoodinterpersonalrelationships.Sincepeopleliveinalargecommunity,whendealingwithpeople,youhavetobehonest.Itwillleavepeopleabadimpressionifyoucheatthem.Gradually,youwillbeisolated.Onthecontrary,ifyoucommunicatewiththemhonestly,peoplewillbewillingtostrengthenrelationswithyou.Therefore,youwillgaingoodinterpersonalrelationships.

Furthermore,dishonestycan’tbeeverlasting.Eventhoughyouenjoyanhonoredreputationthroughcheating,thetrustwillcomeoutsoonerorlater.“Youcancheatonce,butyoucan’tcheatforawholelife,”astheChineseproverbgoes.Inthelongrun,it’sworthwhiletobehonest.

Honestyisstillimportantinmodernlife,becauseitentitlesyoutonotonlygoodinterpersonalrelationshipsbutalsoaneverlastingreputation.Whatpeopleneedtodoistreasureitandapplyittodailylife.2．ItPaystobeHonest(Jeffson)

Honesty,whichisregardedasavirtue,canbringpeopleornationsmuchpraise;whiledishonesty,assin,canbringpeopleornationsmuchtrouble.Therefore,itpaystobehonest.Moreoftenthannot,honestpeopleornationsarewelltreatedbytheircounterparts,whiledishonestonesareusuallylookeddownupon;theresultsforthemarepolesapart.Honestpeoplewingoodreputations,forwhattheysaycounts,andpeoplecanturntothemforhelp.Inordertoshowgratitudeandrespect,peoplearegladtomakefriendswiththemandtreatthemaswellaspossible.Soisthecasewithnations.Nationswhoalwayskeeptowhattheysaywillwincredit.Therefore,othernationsarewillingtotradeorcooperatewiththem,whichmayhelpthesenationsflourish.Bycontrast,dishonestpeopleornationsareoftenmetwithdistrust.Forexample,anationnotoriousforpiratingproductswillnotshareothernation’smarkets,anditseconomywillbeseverelyaffected.

Tosummarize,honestycanbringfametopeopleorflourishcountries;whiledishonestycanruinthem.Sotobehonestisnotmerelyanexpressionofgoodvirtuebutalsoacleverchoice.

3.ItPaystobeHonest(Lillian)

Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,moreandmorepeoplehavebecomedishonest.Theconsequencescanbeineverythingfrompersonalrelationshipstothedeathrate.Therefore,honestyisabasiccharacteristicthathumanbeingsmusthaveanditisveryimportanttotheworld.

Foronething,beinghonestwillproducebetterrelationshipsdirectly.Therewillbefewermisunderstandingsamongpeople.Forinstance,ifacoupleishonestwitheachotherallthetime,theywillhaveagoodrelationshipintheirfamily.Iftheyaredishonest,everythingwillbetheopposite.

Foranotherthing,honestywillreducethedeathrate.Anhonestdoctorcansavealotofpeople,butadishonestdoctorcankillagreatnumberofpeoplewithhis/herdishonestwordsbecausesomewrongmedicinesmaycausepatientstolosetheirlives.Tosumup,theworldneedshonestpeople,soallofusshouldbehonest.Better

relationships,lessmisunderstandings,andreducingthedeathratedependonhonesthearts.Therefore,honestyanddishonestyarecloselyrelatedtoourlives,societies,andeventhewholeworld.

4.ItPaystobeHonest(Helen)

Inrecentyears,peoplehavebecomemoreindividualistic.Somepeoplehaveevenbecomemoreselfish.TheyhaveforgottenthevaluethathaslongservedasafoundationofChinesecharacter:honesty.

Thetraditionalvalueofhonestycanenhancerelationshipsbecauseitisafoundationalaspectofourcharacter.Firstofall,honestyisoneofthewonderfultraditionsinChina.Becauseithasinfluencedmanygenerations,weshouldkeephonestyfirmlyinourminds.Moreover,honestyisagoodwaytoenhancetherelationshipsamongpeople.Ifyoutreatyourfriendsorrelativeshonestly,theywilltreatyouhonestlyinreturn.Inotherwords,peoplewillgetonwellwitheachotherwiththehelpofhonesty.Finally,honestyisoneoftheelementaryaspectsofourwholecharacter.Becauseofhonesty,wecantrustothers,andalsootherscantrustus.Itprovidesachanceforpeopletocommunicatewitheachotherequallyandfairly.

Tosummarize,honestyisoneofthewonderfultraditionsinChina;itcanenhancepeople’srelationships,anditisoneoftheelementaryaspectsofourcharacter.Weshouldtreateveryonehonestlyinourdailylives.5.ReduceWasteonCampus(Rachel)

Ifeverystudentoncampuswastesagramofriceandthrowsawayapieceofpapereveryday,thetotalwastewouldbebeyondpeople’simagination.Evensmallresources,whenusedwell,canhelpmeetneedsandaiddevelopment.Studentscanreducewasteoncampusbysavingfoodandpaper.

Inordertoavoidwastingfood,studentsandcafeteriaworkersmustmakeanefforttoensurethebalanceofsupplyanddemandforfood.Studentscanbuyacertainamountoffoodeverydaywhichisjustenoughfortheirneeds.Cafeteriaworkerscanprovidestudentswithdifferentamountsoffoodtocaterfordifferentneeds.

Makingthemostofapieceofwritingpaperisanotherwaytoreducewasteoncampus.Studentsoftenthrowawaypiecesofpaper,thatarejustpartlyused.Oncestudentsbecomeawarethatwastingpaperisanillhabitespeciallywhiledoingcalculations,theycanwritesmallerandmakefulluseofmargins.Also,bothsidesofpapercanbeused.

Collegestudentsshouldtrytheirutmosttoreducewasteoncampusbysavingfoodandpaper.Studentsshouldtaketheselittleresponsibilitiesseriously,becauseforacountrytodevelop,theproblemofwasteshouldneverbeignored.6.ReduceWasteonCampus(Leroy)

Reducingwasteoncampusisnecessaryandimportantbecausewastemakesthecampusdirtyandunattractive.Increasingthecleaners’dutifulnessandthestudents’responsibilityarethetwomosteffectivewaystoreducewaste.

Tobeginwith,thecleanersoncampusshoulddotheirworkdutifully.Eachcampushasmanycleanerswhoseworkistocleanthecampuseveryday.Iftheydoitheartandsoul,therewillbelesswasteoncampus.However,therearemanycleanerswhoarenotdutifulenough,whichresultsinadirtyschool.Therefore,thecleaners’dutifulnessisveryimportant.

Inaddition,studentsoncampusareresponsibleforcleaningtheirschool.Manystudentshavebadbehavior,suchasthrowingoutwasteeverywhere.Iftheypaymoreattentiontotheirbadbehavior,theschoolwillbecomecleaner.However,iftheydonotcareabouttheirbadbehavior,thenitisnothardtoimaginewhattheschoolwillbelike.

Inconclusion,bothcleanersandstudentsplayanimportantroleinreducingwasteoncampus.Everycleanerandeverystudentshouldrealizetheirimportanceandsetagoodexampletoothers,sothatthecampuswillbecomemorebeautifulandattractive.7.ReduceWasteonCampus(Daniel)

Duetotheimprovementofthelivingstandard,wastingwaterandfoodhavebecomehabitualamongmanystudentsoncampus.Itisevenworsethatsomeofthemconsiderwastingacceptable.

Wastingwateriscommononcampus.First,withoutthehelpoftheirparents,lotsofstudentshavetodowashingbythemselves.Therefore,manyofthemusealargeamountofwateronlytowashapairofsocks.Theyarenotawareoftheimportanceofwater.Second,therearealwayssomecarelesspeople,whoforgettoturnoffthetapandleavethewaterrunning.

Inaddition,itisquitenormaltoseethatstudentsthrowawaytheirfoodwhentoomuchisleft.Forexample,theyspendplentyofmoneyondrinksforaparty,butwhentheyarenolongerthirsty,theyleavethemwithouthesitation.Everyoneisusedtoit.

Wastingwaterandfoodseemquitelittlebutactuallytheyaretosomeextenthugeproblems.Theyindicatethatstudentsarenotthriftyandnotresponsible.Therefore,ifstudentsreallylearntoconsiderwastingasabadhabitandtakeactiontoreduceitfromnowon,thencampusisnotonlyaplaceforstudy,butalsoaplacetodevelophealthyhabitsthatwillimprovesociety.

扩展阅读：大学英语专业四级写作总结

201*年英语专业四级考试写作预测范文10

该资讯由光阴似箭添加逛逛Ta的教室发布时间：201*-2-1510:00:00

英语专业四级、英语专业八级考试写作预测作文

Everynowandthenwehearnewsaboutpoisonousfood，suchastaintedmilkpowder，illegalfoodadditives，andillegalcookingoil，whichposegreatdangertopeople‘shealth.Giveyourideasofcrackingdownonpoisonousfood.

WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic：MyIdeasofCrackingdownonPoisonousFoodYouaretowriteinthreeparts.

Inthefirstpart，statespecificallywhatyouropinionis.

Inthesecondpart，provideoneortworeasonstosupportyourideaORdescribeyouridea.Inthelastpart，bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent，organization，grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.范文

MyIdeasofCrackingdownonPoisonousFood

Recentlytherearealotofnewsaboutpoisonousfood，suchastaintedmilkpowder，illegalfoodadditives，andillegalcookingoil，whichdogreatharmtopeople’shealth.Thenewshasarousedmuchpanicamongpeople，andit‘shightimethatwetookmeasurestocrackdownonpoisonousfood.

Tocrackdownonpoisonousfood，Ihavesomeideastooffer.First，thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoforbidthemakingofpoisonousfood.Manufacturerswhoarecaughtmakingthesekindsoffoodshouldbepunishedseverely，andfactoriesinwhichthesekindsoffoodareproducedshouldbecloseddown.Second，foodmanufacturersmustbewellinformedthattheyshouldproducesafefoodasfoodsafetyistheirfirstpriorityinbusiness.Third，peopleshouldbemorecautious.Whenyouareshoppingfood，pleaserememberthatnaturalfoodisusuallysafer，betterandcheaperthanartificialfood.Andifyouthinkthatsomebrandsoffoodmaybepoisonous，complaintotherelateddepartmentwithouthesitation.

Inoneword，onlywhenboththegovernmentandcitizenstakesomemeasurescanpoisonousfoodbecrackeddownon.

大学英语专业四级考试写作范文预测（二）

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Helpingstrangersusedtobeconsideredasavirtue.Butnowadayspeopletendtobeverycautiousofstrangers.Theyareafraidthathelpingotherscansometimesbringthemtrouble.What‘syouropinion？

WriteonANSWERSHEETTHREEacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic：

ShouldWeHelpStrangers？

Youaretowriteinthreeparts.

Inthefirstpart，statespecificallywhatyouropinionis.

Inthesecondpart，supportyouropinionwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpart，bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent，organization，grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.范文

ShouldWeHelpStrangers？

Weusedtoappreciatethosewholiketohelpstrangers.Butnowadayspeopletendtobeverycautiousofstrangers，becausetheyareafraidthathelpingotherscansometimesbringthemtrouble.Inmyopinion，weshouldtryourbesttohelpothersinareasonableway.

Weshouldtrytohelpothers，nomattertheyarestrangersornot.First，helpingothersisavirtue，anditwillmakeoursocietymoreharmonious.Justimaginewhataterribleworlditwouldbeifeveryonewascoldhearted！Second，tosomeextent，helpingothersishelpingoneself.Wemaycomeacrosssometroubleandneedothers’helpsomeday.Ifeveryoneturnsablindeyetoourtroubleandturnsadeafeartoourappealforaidjustbecausewearestrangerstothem，whatshallwedoatthattime？Therefore，weshouldbegladtohelpothers.

However，helpingothersmaysometimesbringustroubleorevenputusindanger.Sowhenwearehelpingothers，weshouldalsoprotectourselvesandofferourhelpinanappropriateway.Forexample，tohelpsomeonewhowasrobbed，callingthepoliceisamuchwiserwaythanchasingtherobbersalone.

本文来自学习网()，原文地址：首先说说专四作文第一篇作文的结构：

1.第一部分引出话题，摆明立场。个人观点一定要鲜明，不可模棱两可，也不要中立。是

就是，不是就不是。赞成就赞成，反对就反对。

2.第二部分陈述你的观点，用两个或三个例子来支撑你的论点，要解释为什么，并简要提

出解决办法。段首要有中心句。主题和重点要突出。有些同学写作时比较容易跑题，引用例子和陈述观点时要注意扣题。注意Onetopic,oneparagraph.中间陈述观点的两个方面可以分开两个段来写，也可合为一段写。建议大家在考试时分两段，这是Aden的批改习惯。

3.第三部分回应你在第一部分的观点，对话题做一个小小的总结。回应第一段时句子不要

单纯复制第一段陈述观点的句子，应用另一种语言来restateyourtwotopicsentences.

国家专四写作考试要求第一篇作文字数为200左右，但Aden平时布置作业习惯是150字左右的，所以大家在考试时写150字左右就可以了，若写不出那么多东西，也要起码120字。期末考试时间为一个小时，有足够的时间给大家写作文，所以请大家写作文时细心点、耐心

点，认真点写，想清楚了再写，尽量避免低级语法错误和避免表达不清。考试的形式就和我们考专四作文的形式一样，给出一个话题你，然后写作文。考试不难的，且Aden挺好人的，他也不想大家挂科，大家不用太担心考试的难度。考试时你若提早写完作文可以提早离开，但不要太早，最好起码过了40分钟再走吧。到时考试时若你很想那么早走就自己跟Aden说吧。

以下我为大家总结的写作常犯错误不仅仅是为了考试的，大家以后写英文作文时若犯了较多错误可以看看。当然，大家看了以下常犯错误后也不用太紧张，在写作时若有太多顾虑，太束缚自己又不好了，总结常犯错误我只是想提醒下大家。

其次，简要总结下同学在写作中常犯的错误：

一、句子：

1.…thereasonwhy…isbecause…

Reason和because在同一个句子中出现，意义重复了，应删掉because2.Then…Also…Besides…So…

以上四个词英语中是不把它们放在句首的，而是把它们放在句中的：…,then...…,also...…,besides...…,so...

3.流水句，不经意间将两个相互独立的分句直接用逗号连接，而不使用平行连词或其他适

当的连接手段。如：SanFranciscoisaverycosmopolitancity,therearepeoplefrommanyculturesandethnicgroupslivingthere.

改正这类错误，最直接的最简单的改法就是增加连接词，通常为and或but，但有时硬硬地加and和but会使语意不是很连贯。使用连接手段应该根据语意、两个分句之间的联系等情况使用句号、分号或平行连词（and,but等）、主从连词（although,because等）。4.Itis…

这一句型表达的意思通常是很模糊的，因为it可以指很多东西，所以在英文写作中要尽量避免使用Itis…句型，除非你写itis…这一句前面有非常清楚的指代，让人不用思考就知道it指的是什么。5.Suchas…andsoon…

在英文中suchas和andsoon是不可用在同一句中的，因为这两个词组用在同一句中的会造成语义重复。6.中国式英语

这是一个令我们许多人纠结的问题，我们要写的专四作文要求不是很高，大家在表达时尽量不要弄得太复杂，简单明了就行了，许多我们中国人特有的语言如“提高了国际形象”等应尽量避免。

7.句子成分不完整

如：Forexample,theincreaseinthecostofrentinganapartment.Manypeoplewhogetmarriedbeforetheyarematureenough.

这个句子细看一下，大家可以发现这两个个句子没有谓语。forexample后面引出的例子是

完整的一个例子，要用完整的句子来表述。还有，forexample在作文中用一次就够了，不宜用太多次。第一句要重新加上谓语，如：Forexample,theincreaseinthecostofrentinganapartmenthasincreased。Who后面的是定语从句，修饰manypeople,是一个从属分句，在这句中把who去掉就可以了。8.Thereis/are…

这个句型也可造成表达不清，大家应尽量避免。还有，大家用这个句型比较经常犯一个错误：Therearemanystudentsreadbooksinthelibrary.这个句子有两个谓语了，所以为避免这种错误这个句型应尽量避免。

二、词组

cultureatmosphere(x)culturalatmosphere

economy’sdevelopment(x)economicdevelopmentdevelopeconomy(x)developtheeconomy

doharmtoenvironment(x)doharmtotheenvironment

spendsomethingtosomething(x)spendsomethingonsomething/in(doing)somethingprotectnature(x)protectthenaturethesociety(x)society

inourlife(x)ineverydaylife

concernsth/sb(x)beconcernedaboutsth(常用)/showconcernaboutsth/concernoneselfwithsth

notonlylikesthbutalso(x)likenotonlysthbutalso

Chinagovernment/China’sgovernment/theChinagovernment(x)Chinesegovernmentthestandardoflivinghasbeenimproved(x)thestandardoflivinghasimproved

alotapples(x)alotofapples/lotsofapples注意：在英语中alot通常是用于修饰程度等的副词词组，如Thanksalot.非常感谢。alotof和lotsof才是修饰名词的，可数和不可数的均可。

livingstandard-standardofliving(better)

oursociety/school/library/study/imaginationsociety/theschool/thelibrary/thestudent’sstudy/thestudent’simagination

注意：our在英语中是指somethingshared,在英文作文中用our范围太笼统了、太广了，应尽量避免在写英文作文时用它。

除了个别习惯搭配外，为了使英文文章简单、清晰，写作文时应尽量避免用过多介词，如说thedevelopmentoftheeconomy，不如说economicdevelopment好。withthedevelopmentofsocietyassocietydevelops(better)表达：

景点：ascenicspot/scenicspots小结：

1．because指直接、明了的、有根据的原因，可放在句首或句中；for表推测的原因，不一

定成立，语气最弱，常放在句中；since指几乎大家都知道的原因，意为“既然”，可放在句首或句中。在使用这三个词时切勿乱用。

2．写作时要尽量避免用人称代词，因为它们太口语化，显得考试的作文不够正式，且在作

文中容易导致指代不明。

3．不要用many修饰不可数名词，不要用much修饰可数名词

4．尽量避免用it指代事物，因为it可以指代很多东西，虽然你知道it是指什么，但改卷

老师和读者并不清楚，他们要看it前面的甚至全文的内容才可能知道it指代什么，所以要避免。

5．尽量不要把介词或介词词组放在句首。6．尽量避免用our。

7．关于作文中用得太多让人看了无聊的词组(请见PDF文件TransitionPhrases（过渡短语）)：atthesametimemeanwhile/simultaneously/followedbynowadaysrecently/presently/currently(better)first,second,thirdfirst,next,finallyrightawayimmediately

inconclusiontherefore/thus/consequently/insummary/inbriefinadditionfurthermore/moreover/additionallyhoweverwhereas/nevertheless

在此给大家一个网址看看中国学生写英文作文方面存在的问题。

我们专四那本书的108页至123页有不少例文，并且例文里有评价和指出我们中国学生写英文作文常犯的一些错误，建议大家看看，充分利用下我们手上有的资源。

附：7篇专四写作例文

1.ItPaystobeHonest

Asthesocietyisbecomingmorecommercialized,itseemsthatprofitandinterestarethevitalimportantfactorsoflife.Inordertogetsuccess,somepeoplecheatothers.However,itpaystobehonestifyouwanttogetagoodrelationshipwithotherandwinapermanentreputation.

Firstandforemost,honestyisavirtuethatcanhelpyouacquiregoodinterpersonalrelationships.Sincepeopleliveinalargecommunity,whendealingwithpeople,youhavetobehonest.Itwillleavepeopleabadimpressionifyoucheatthem.Gradually,youwillbeisolated.Onthecontrary,ifyoucommunicatewiththemhonestly,peoplewillbewillingtostrengthenrelationswithyou.Therefore,youwillgaingoodinterpersonalrelationships.Furthermore,dishonestycan’tbeeverlasting.Eventhoughyouenjoyanhonoredreputationthroughcheating,thetrustwillcomeoutsoonerorlater.“Youcancheatonce,butyoucan’tcheatforawholelife,”astheChineseproverbgoes.Inthelongrun,it’sworthwhiletobehonest.

Honestyisstillimportantinmodernlife,becauseitentitlesyoutonotonlygoodinterpersonalrelationshipsbutalsoaneverlastingreputation.Whatpeopleneedtodoistreasureitandapplyittodailylife.2．ItPaystobeHonest(Jeffson)

Honesty,whichisregardedasavirtue,canbringpeopleornationsmuchpraise;whiledishonesty,assin,canbringpeopleornationsmuchtrouble.Therefore,itpaystobehonest.Moreoftenthannot,honestpeopleornationsarewelltreatedbytheircounterparts,whiledishonestonesareusuallylookeddownupon;theresultsforthemarepolesapart.Honest

peoplewingoodreputations,forwhattheysaycounts,andpeoplecanturntothemforhelp.Inordertoshowgratitudeandrespect,peoplearegladtomakefriendswiththemandtreatthemaswellaspossible.Soisthecasewithnations.Nationswhoalwayskeeptowhattheysaywillwincredit.Therefore,othernationsarewillingtotradeorcooperatewiththem,whichmayhelpthesenationsflourish.Bycontrast,dishonestpeopleornationsareoftenmetwithdistrust.Forexample,anationnotoriousforpiratingproductswillnotshareothernation’smarkets,anditseconomywillbeseverelyaffected.

Tosummarize,honestycanbringfametopeopleorflourishcountries;whiledishonestycanruinthem.Sotobehonestisnotmerelyanexpressionofgoodvirtuebutalsoacleverchoice.

3.ItPaystobeHonest(Lillian)

Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,moreandmorepeoplehavebecomedishonest.Theconsequencescanbeineverythingfrompersonalrelationshipstothedeathrate.Therefore,honestyisabasiccharacteristicthathumanbeingsmusthaveanditisveryimportanttotheworld.

Foronething,beinghonestwillproducebetterrelationshipsdirectly.Therewillbefewermisunderstandingsamongpeople.Forinstance,ifacoupleishonestwitheachotherallthetime,theywillhaveagoodrelationshipintheirfamily.Iftheyaredishonest,everythingwillbetheopposite.

Foranotherthing,honestywillreducethedeathrate.Anhonestdoctorcansavealotofpeople,butadishonestdoctorcankillagreatnumberofpeoplewithhis/herdishonestwordsbecausesomewrongmedicinesmaycausepatientstolosetheirlives.Tosumup,theworldneedshonestpeople,soallofusshouldbehonest.Better

relationships,lessmisunderstandings,andreducingthedeathratedependonhonesthearts.Therefore,honestyanddishonestyarecloselyrelatedtoourlives,societies,andeventhewholeworld.

4.ItPaystobeHonest(Helen)

Inrecentyears,peoplehavebecomemoreindividualistic.Somepeoplehaveevenbecomemoreselfish.TheyhaveforgottenthevaluethathaslongservedasafoundationofChinesecharacter:honesty.

Thetraditionalvalueofhonestycanenhancerelationshipsbecauseitisafoundationalaspectofourcharacter.Firstofall,honestyisoneofthewonderfultraditionsinChina.Becauseithasinfluencedmanygenerations,weshouldkeephonestyfirmlyinourminds.Moreover,honestyisagoodwaytoenhancetherelationshipsamongpeople.Ifyoutreatyourfriendsorrelativeshonestly,theywilltreatyouhonestlyinreturn.Inotherwords,peoplewillgetonwellwitheachotherwiththehelpofhonesty.Finally,honestyisoneoftheelementaryaspectsofourwholecharacter.Becauseofhonesty,wecantrustothers,andalsootherscantrustus.Itprovidesachanceforpeopletocommunicatewitheachotherequallyandfairly.

Tosummarize,honestyisoneofthewonderfultraditionsinChina;itcanenhancepeople’srelationships,anditisoneoftheelementaryaspectsofourcharacter.Weshouldtreateveryonehonestlyinourdailylives.5.ReduceWasteonCampus(Rachel)

Ifeverystudentoncampuswastesagramofriceandthrowsawayapieceofpapereveryday,thetotalwastewouldbebeyondpeople’simagination.Evensmallresources,whenusedwell,canhelpmeetneedsandaiddevelopment.Studentscanreducewasteoncampusbysavingfoodandpaper.

Inordertoavoidwastingfood,studentsandcafeteriaworkersmustmakeanefforttoensurethebalanceofsupplyanddemandforfood.Studentscanbuyacertainamountoffoodeverydaywhichisjustenoughfortheirneeds.Cafeteriaworkerscanprovidestudentswithdifferentamountsoffoodtocaterfordifferentneeds.

Makingthemostofapieceofwritingpaperisanotherwaytoreducewasteoncampus.Studentsoftenthrowawaypiecesofpaper,thatarejustpartlyused.Oncestudentsbecomeawarethatwastingpaperisanillhabitespeciallywhiledoingcalculations,theycanwritesmallerandmakefulluseofmargins.Also,bothsidesofpapercanbeused.

Collegestudentsshouldtrytheirutmosttoreducewasteoncampusbysavingfoodandpaper.Studentsshouldtaketheselittleresponsibilitiesseriously,becauseforacountrytodevelop,theproblemofwasteshouldneverbeignored.6.ReduceWasteonCampus(Leroy)

Reducingwasteoncampusisnecessaryandimportantbecausewastemakesthecampusdirtyandunattractive.Increasingthecleaners’dutifulnessandthestudents’responsibilityarethetwomosteffectivewaystoreducewaste.

Tobeginwith,thecleanersoncampusshoulddotheirworkdutifully.Eachcampushasmanycleanerswhoseworkistocleanthecampuseveryday.Iftheydoitheartandsoul,therewillbelesswasteoncampus.However,therearemanycleanerswhoarenotdutifulenough,whichresultsinadirtyschool.Therefore,thecleaners’dutifulnessisveryimportant.Inaddition,studentsoncampusareresponsibleforcleaningtheirschool.Manystudentshavebadbehavior,suchasthrowingoutwasteeverywhere.Iftheypaymoreattentiontotheirbadbehavior,theschoolwillbecomecleaner.However,iftheydonotcareabouttheirbadbehavior,thenitisnothardtoimaginewhattheschoolwillbelike.

Inconclusion,bothcleanersandstudentsplayanimportantroleinreducingwasteoncampus.Everycleanerandeverystudentshouldrealizetheirimportanceandsetagoodexampletoothers,sothatthecampuswillbecomemorebeautifulandattractive.7.ReduceWasteonCampus(Daniel)

Duetotheimprovementofthelivingstandard,wastingwaterandfoodhavebecomehabitualamongmanystudentsoncampus.Itisevenworsethatsomeofthemconsiderwastingacceptable.

Wastingwateriscommononcampus.First,withoutthehelpoftheirparents,lotsofstudentshavetodowashingbythemselves.Therefore,manyofthemusealargeamountofwateronlytowashapairofsocks.Theyarenotawareoftheimportanceofwater.Second,therearealwayssomecarelesspeople,whoforgettoturnoffthetapandleavethewaterrunning.

Inaddition,itisquitenormaltoseethatstudentsthrowawaytheirfoodwhentoomuchisleft.Forexample,theyspendplentyofmoneyondrinksforaparty,butwhentheyarenolongerthirsty,theyleavethemwithouthesitation.Everyoneisusedtoit.

Wastingwaterandfoodseemquitelittlebutactuallytheyaretosomeextenthugeproblems.Theyindicatethatstudentsarenotthriftyandnotresponsible.Therefore,ifstudentsreallylearntoconsiderwastingasabadhabitandtakeactiontoreduceitfromnowon,thencampusisnotonlyaplaceforstudy,butalsoaplacetodevelophealthyhabitsthatwillimprovesociety.

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