对比型作文结尾段

对比型作文结尾段

一比较型作文

（一）比较型作文一般分为说明式比较和议论式比较两种。

说明式比较在比较过程中，作者不发表个人意见，在文中不体现个人取向，单纯以说明介绍为目的。议论式比较以比较事物优劣，阐明自己立场为目的，一般分为倾向型和中立型两种类型。

（二）比较论说文一般有两种模式：

1．首段：明确摆出自己的立场。主体部分：通过运用比较，对比等手段，进一步说明自己取向或偏好的原因及正确性。结尾段：重申立场。

2．首段：只引出现象，对个人观点予以保留。体部分：进行对比。结尾段：自然而然地得出论点

作文题目

1.MakingFriendswithPeopleofsimilarordifferentpersonalities?2.AdvertisementorQualityofProducts?3.LivingAloneorLivingwithRoommates?4.CompareUrbanAreaswithRuralAreas5.ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively?6.CompetitionorCooperation?

7.BookKnowledgeorPracticalExperience?8.CommunicatingbyTelephoneorbyLetter?首段

I.首段=引言句+主题句

引言句：引出比较的对象，主题句：提出主题，明确表明作者的个人取向或偏好。引言句一般为与作文题紧密相关的社会背景，现实状况或是时下人们对某一事件或事物的普遍取向或偏好。主题句则开宗明义，明确提出作者的立场，观点，取向或偏好。

II.首段常用句型

1.Itiswidelyaccepted/anundeniablefactthat----Itgoeswithoutsayingthat-----Thereisnodobtthat------Itistruethat----

-----aregettingtheirwaysintoourdailylife.

E.g.Itiswidelyaccepted/anundeniablefactthatmoderntechnologyhasbenefitedhumanbeings.

2.Nowadays,therearesome/differentwaystodo---,suchasAandB.Butwhenitcomesto---

E.g.Nowadays,therearetwowaystoentertainourselves,suchaswatchingTVathomeandgoingtomovieswhenwearefree.

3.Withtherapiddevelopmentof…,..….is/areplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartin…today

4.Therehasalwaysbeen/usedtobeaheateddiscussionoverwhetherAismoreimportantthanB.

5.ThosewhoareinfavorofAhavetheirownreasons,whileothersargue/contendthat---.Somepeopletendtofavor---,but/while/meanwhile/onthecontraryothers-----.E.g.Somepeopleprefertravelingalone,butothersliketravelingwithfriends.

6.AlthoughA----,IlikedoingB---

Despitethefactthatamajorityofpeopletendto/preferto--,I’minfavorof---Iagreewiththeformeronesomehow.

Inmypointofview,Ilikeoutdoorexercisesmuchmorethanindooractivities.

E.g.AlthoughmanypeopletendtofavorTVprogram,Ilikegoingtomovies.

E.g.Despitethefactthatamajorityofpeopleprefertotraveltogetherwithfriends,I’minfavoroftravelingalone.

7.Butinmyopinion,bothAandBareessential.

Personally,IprefertostrikeabalancebetweenAandB.Asforme,I’minfavorofacombinationofAandB.IprefertocombineAandB.

AandBareofthesame/equalimportance.

WhileIattachmuchimportancetoA,Iwon’tgiveupanychancetodo----

E.g.WhileIattachmuchimportancetoindooractivites,Iwon’tgiveupanychancetotakepartinoutdooractivities.

（五）模板

1.Itisgenerallyacceptedthat-------areanindispensablepartofourdailylife,butwhenitcomesto-------,therehassprungupaheateddiscussionasto-----.Asforme,Ipreferto--------

2.Peopleallknowthat-------isveryimportant,however,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowards------.Somepeoplesaywe’dbetter--------,onthecontrary,othersbelievethatwewould----------.ButasfarasIamconcerned,Ipreferabalancebetweenthetwo.

3.Itisoftendifficultfor--------todecidewhetherAorB.However,immyopinion,Aisalwaysbetter.

4.ThosewhopreferAhavetheirownreasons,whilesomeotherpeoplepreferB.Asforme,bothAansBhavemeritsanddemerits.

5.Whichismoreimportantinlife,-------,or-------?Theanswermayvaryfrompersontoperson.Butinmyopinion,theyofthesameimportance.

6.-----isveryimportantbothinthepastandpresent.Withthedevelopmentof----,----.

(Communicationisveryimportantbothinthepastandatpresent.Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,letterscanbesentmuchmorequicklythaneverbefore,butwhenthetelephoneappeared,mostpeoplehaveturnedtoit.)

7.-----aregettingtheirwayintopeople’slives.ThosewhoarefavorofAarguethat----whileotherpeoplethink-------.

8.Nowdays,theinfluenceof-----provestobeprofound.Andtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateasto-------.

对比型作文结尾段落

模式一结尾段=呼应主题句+强调被肯定事物的积极作用等

1.Iprefertravelingindividually,becauseformetohaveaholidaytouristoenjoyandrelaxmysylf,andtorelaxthoroughly,freedomisofessence.Ifyoulosethefreedomofaction,itisnolongeraholidayinanythingbutname.

2.Fromtheabovecomparisonandcontrast,wecancometotheconclusionthatthecityisstillabetterchoiceforchildren’seducation,thoughsomedisadvantagesdoexist.Onlyincitiescanchildrenbewellpreparedfortheirfuturelifeandkeepupwiththetrendoftheworld.

3.Iregardroomingtogetherasapreciousopportunityforitisthebestwayoflearningcooperationandunderstanding.AndIconfidentlybelievethatsuchexperiencewillbehelpfulinone’slaterlife.

4.Therefore,Istronglyadvocatecommunicatingbyletter.Anditwillprovetobeoneofthewaystobeindependentfromtelephonewhenyoupickupyourpentowritealetter.

5.Inaword,determinationisthekeytosuccess.Withastrongdeterminationonecannotonlybringhisopportunitiesintofullplay,butconquerwhateverhardshipsordangershemayface.

6.Inaword,thebestchoiceisagoodmajoratagooduniversity,butwithoutgreateffortswecanhardlygetsuchachoice.Ifwecannotobtainboth,inmyopinion,thefirstthingtoconsiderisagoodmajor.

常用句型

1)Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors/GiventhefactorsIhavejustoutlined/Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Nowaftercloseexamination/Forthereasonsgivenabove,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusion/wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusion/Iprefer/Istronglyrecommendthat___.

2)Inmyopinion,weshouldplacemuchemphasisontheimportanceof___.3)Inshort,Isupportthestatementthatitisbetterto____because____.

模式二结尾段=让步句+呼应主题句

1.Indooractivitiesaresomewhatchallengingaswell,forexample,chessandbookreadingcanalsodevelopourmind.HoweverIstillpreferoutdooractivities,fortheyteachmehowtobeastrongman,bothinhealthandinspirit.

2.Ofcourse,travelingalonehasitsownmerits:youcanchangeyourdestinationatanytimeandstayinoneplaceaslongasyoulike.ButIstillliketotravelwithfriends,becauseIthinkthatthemostimportantthingduringtravelistogetpleasureansrelaxation,andwithfriends,Icangetallthesethingseasily.常用句型

1)Inspiteofthesaidadvantagesof____,Iwillchoose____

2)Ofcourse,____hasitsmerits.ButI’mstillinfavoroftravelingalone___.

3)Both____and____havetheirownadvantages.Forexample,____,while____.Comparingthosetwo,however,Ipreferto____.

中立型结尾段=呼应主题句+一句话总结（总结所比较对象最突出的优点，可用while,whereas连接）

1.Ipreferabalanceoftheseactivities.Inmyopinion,physicalrecreationisnecessaryforgoodhealthbutintellectualpursuitsprovidemorepleasure.

2.Bothbookknowledgeandpersonalexperienceareessential.Whileexperiencemakesonemoreresourceful,bookknowledgemakesonemorelearned.

Therefore,weneedboth___and___.Theformer___,andthelatter___

3.Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright.Whenwe…weshouldtakeintoconsiderationallaspectsoftheproblemsandthenmaketherightdecision.

4.Personally,Ithinknothingwillbesorewardingthancombiningselectivereadingandextensivereading.Asfarasbadbooksareconcerned,weshouldneverreadthem,butasforgoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan..

5.Inmyopinion,weshouldbothreadselectivelyandextensivelyaswell.Withbadbooks,weshouldneverreadthem,butforgoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan..

6.Despitethefactthatthemajorityofpeoplepreferadvertisements,I’minfavorofagoodcombinationofadsandqualityofproducts.Onlyinsuchawaycouldwepromotethesalessuccessfully.

7.Inaword,wemustlearntobebothcooperativeandcompetitiveinordertosucceedinlife.Whatweneedtolearniswhentobecooperatioveandwhentobecompetitive.Thesecretof___liesinthecombinationofboth___and___.

扩展阅读：比较型作文

201*英语四级写作训练(二):比较型作文之1

来源：日期：201*-10-06阅读

21次作者:NB

比较型作文之8分作文

比较型作文一般分为说明式比较和议论式比较两种。说明式比较在比较过程中，作者不发表个人意见，在文中不体现个人取向，单纯以说明介绍为目的。

在四、六级考试中的比较型作文多以议论式比较的形式出现。议论式比较以比较事物优劣、阐明自己立场为目的，一般分为倾向型和中立型两种类型。

一、倾向型比较论说文

1.、首段=引言+主题句

引言句（第一句）：引出比较的对象

主题句（第二句）：提出主题，明确表明作者的个人取向与偏好。2、主体部分

对比点的笔墨分配：应有所侧重，对于作者持否定态度的事物的优势要少写，而肯定的事物的优点则要多用笔墨，对于其缺点则可轻描淡写、一笔带过。3、结尾段=呼应主题句+强调被肯定事物的积极作用等第一句：呼应主题句

第二句：可以用一句话归纳被肯定事物的优点等。

结尾段=让步句+呼应主题句

第一句：以让步的口吻，提出被否定事物的一个小优点第二句：笔锋一转，用一句话归纳并突出被肯定事物的重大优点，进一步确定自己的选择，与主题句相互照应。

二、中立型比较论说文

首段和主体部分与倾向型比较论说文相同，而结尾段一般采用简化总结模式：结尾段=呼应主题句+一句话总结第一句：呼应主题句

第二句：总结所比较对象最突出的优点，可用while，whereas连接万能模板：

倾向型

1.有人认为大学住宿应该独处一室2.有人认为应该与同学合住3.我的观点

Itisoftendifficultfor______todecidewhetherAorB.Inmyopinion,Aisalwaysbetter.

Somestudentsdon"tlikeB.First,theythink______because______.Second,_______.Third,_________.TheincomparableadvantageofAisthat

___________.First,___________.Second,________.Third,________.IregardAasapreciousopportunityforitisthebestwayof___________.AndIconfidentlybelievethat_______.中立型1.有人喜欢乡村生活2.有人喜欢都市生活3.我的观点

ThosewhopreferAhavetheirownreasons,whilesomeotherpeoplepreferB.Asforme,bothAandBhavemeritsanddemerits.

Firstandforemost,__________.Moreover,____________.Lastbutnotleast,_______.

Onthecontrary_________.Inaddition,___________.What’sthecommonest,________

Either___________ora_______gives_________.Ibelieve__________

引出不同观点:

1、People’sviewson…varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat….However,othersbelievethat….人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为…..然而其他人却认为．．．

2、Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson…人们对…可能会有不同的见解.

3、Attitudestowards(drugs)varyfrompersontoperson.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.

4、Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto…关于….人们的观点大不相同.

5、Differentpeopleholddifferentattitudestoward(failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.结尾：

1、Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat…

把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…

2、Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…

考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…

3、Hence/Therefore,we’dbettercometotheconclusionthat…因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…

4、Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.

5、Allinall,wecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.

总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.

比较型连接词：like,similarly,likewise,inthesameway,inthesamemanner,equally.

比较型常用句型：

1．Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.2．TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.

3．AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...4．Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...5．Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.6．Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.7．AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.8．AbearssomeresemblancestoB.

9．However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.10.AandBdifferinseveralways.

11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.12.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.13.ThesameistrueofB.

14.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.

15.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults(obviousdefects)are...

四六级考试加分句型：

1.It作先行主语和先行宾语的一些句型。Shehadsaidwhatitwasnecessarytosay.

2.强调句型。Itisnotwhorulesusthatisimportant,buthowherulesus.

3."All+抽象名词"或"抽象名词+itself"(very+形容词)。Hewasallgentlenesstoher.

4.利用词汇重复表示强调。Acrimeisacrimeacrime.5."something(much)of"和"nothing(little)of"

"somethingof"相当于"tosomeextent"，表示程度。在疑问句或条件从句中，则为"anythingof"，可译为"有点"，"略微等。""译为毫无"，"全无"。"muchof"译为"大有"，"notmuchof"可译为"算不上"，"称不上"，"littleof"可译为"几乎无"。somethinglike译为"有点像，略似。"

Theysaythathehadnouniversityeducation,butheseemstobesomethingofascholar.

训练:提纲：

1.有人认为类似于因特网的高科技产品会代替书籍2.有人认为传统的信息产品书籍不会被取代3.我的看法。

这也是模板哦！

Nowadays,theinfluenceof____________provestobeprofound.Andtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateasto___________.(引出话题和争论，但保留作者个人看法)

Peopleinfavorof_________alwaysprovidethefollowing

evidence.Firstly,__________.Secondly,__________.Finally,____________.（偏爱书籍的理由）

Conversely,asforthemeritsof___________,inthefirstplace,________.Secondly,____________.Atthesametime,__________.(英特网等现代科技的优点)

Inshort,Iagreethat_________.（明确提出观点）大家可以选一段练习

具体要求：

首段：引出关于因特网对现代社会的影响+关于因特网和书籍话题存在的争论

主体段落一：有人偏爱阅读传统信息媒体，如书籍原因1：人类文明的历史就是书写的历史原因2：人们可以随处用自己喜欢的姿势阅读原因3：书写形式更有利于安全保存信息主体段落二：如因特网之类的现代技术手段的优点

优点1：新科技的出现历来都回给人类生活带来许多好处优点2：电脑新科技的出现，使信息储备量大大提高优点3：电脑新科技的出现，使信息处理的效率提高了结尾段:：因特网最终会代替书籍等信息手段

参考答案：

Nowadays,theinfluenceofInternetprovestobeprofound.AndtherehasbeenaverycontroversialdebateastowhetherornotInternetwillreplacethebookasthemainsourceofinformation.

Peopleinfavorofthetraditionalinformationsourcesalwaysprovidethefollowingevidence.Firstly,thehistoryofhumancivilizationisthewrittenhistory.Secondly,peoplearefreetochooseanypostureandplacethatmakesthemcomfortablewhenreading.Finally,traditionalinformationsoureceslikebooksarerelativelystableandreliabletopreservethehumaninformationwell.

Conversely,asforthemeritsofmoderntechnologies,inthefirstplace,inhistory,wecanseethateverynewtechnologybringsaboutgreatchangestoourlife.Secondly,moderntechnologylikecomputersisanothergreatinventionthatcanstoreahugeamountofdata.Atthesametime,Weareabletoprocessthedatamorerapidlyandaccuratelythanwecaneverimagine.

Inshort,Iagreethatmoderntechnology,suchastheInternet,willcomedayreplacethewrittenwordasthemainsourceofinformation.Therefore,Iameagerlylookingforwardtothatday.

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