(个人总结)高考英语作文技巧
就是那种各位认为很幼稚的字体!就是刚学英语的孩子写的abcdefg,圆圆的胖胖的,很可爱的那种字体,而且千万要一个字母一个字母的写,不要连在一起!也就是说最好用标准园体。同时注意的是,最好不要涂涂改改注意卷面清爽,就可以了。练字是必须的要字大(字母写的圆一点,不要斜着)行稀,并且上下对应工整,每行的单词数量固定然后把答题纸上的所有行都写满,最多空一行!(因为老师判卷子不会数单词数量的,老师认为你只要把所有空白地方写满就算单词够了,不然你写的密密麻麻,写的再多也算不够数量Veryextraordinarily
一个句子+逗号+however+另一个句子,这里面however是没有实际意义的,就是表转折,但你可以用这招把两个简单句捏在一块啊!短句子成长句了!
inotonlysing,butalsodance,改动一下,notonlydoising,butalsodance.倒装句!ImportantsignificantasaresultasaconsequenceSothereforesetestablishbetterandbetterenhance造个句子weneedtoenhanceourEnglish,就等于betterandbetterGoodgreatwonderfulgorgeous更牛fabulous
Unwantedunsatisfactorychangetransform类似的替换技巧有很多,你们自己也可以总结积累一下
宾语从句,Ithinkthat......没有人不会用吧,不过我奉劝大家尽量别这么用,老师批10张卷子看到了8张里面有Ithinkthat不烦吗?如果一定要用宾语从句的话换一种说法:Ihaveathoughtthat......别看只改动了一点,同位语从句!同样Ihearthat谁都会用吧,不过同样谁都会用所以我们不要用!厉害一些的人会用:Itisreportedthat......不过真正的牛人用Thereisapieceofnewsthat同样的意思,但明显比Ihearthat要帅!
定语从句很多人也愿意用,不过我建议大家不要用,因为其实在英语里,定语从句是种挺白痴的句子,没人说的!
这招凑字数最好使,写出来也挺酷的。举个例子,我喜欢玩篮球,然后篮球有很多种特点,就可以把这些特点用定语从句的形式并列出来:Ilovebasketball,whichis......,whichis......,whichis.......其实在上千年前,我们的老祖宗就会这么用了,大家学过韩愈的师说吧,里面有句话:师者,所以传道授业解惑也。这就是个经典的定语从句,翻译过来就是teacherisajobwho传道,who授业andwho解惑。这种定语从句你要是用出来绝对能吓批卷老师一跳!
还有种用法叫后置定语有人感觉挺难吧,其实记住个例子就行了,穿着比基尼的女孩agirlwhowearsabikini,变成agirlswearingabikini就行了,这就是后置定语,很简单吧语法的问题不也解决了吗,接下来就教大家一些细节地方上的技巧,首先因为什么怎么说?because绝大多数人都用这个单词,教大家一个很绝的用法,逗号+for就可以代替because!举个例子,我总听李孝利的歌,因为我喜欢李孝利:Ioftenhearthesongsof李孝利,foriloveher中间的逗号+for就相当于because,同样,掌握这个用法的同学不多!尽管怎么说?土人们although,而牛人用Inspiteof举个例子,尽管你是女生你也不能欺负我!Inspiteofthefactthatyouare女生,youcan"t欺负me!时间状语大家掌握的都不错吧,一看到她妈妈,小女生一下就哭了,用when就是土人!直接写seeinghermother,zhegirlcried
还有首先是first吧,以后大家可以写firstandforemost,和first一个意思,但看上去牛X的多,另外,用到这个用法时还可以用到一个简单的插入结构主语,firstandforemost,谓语这就是一个插入结构,我在前面还讲了一个however吧,这个单词放到句子中是没什么意义的,就是为了装酷!同样可以用到这:主语,however,谓语插入结构!都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说:Ienjormusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.
如果是二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.其它的短语可以用:
besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话,注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,不应该之说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital之类的形象词。再比如:走出房间,general的词是:walkoutoftheroom
有一个句式说:“…forthesimplereasonthat…”表示某种现象的原因是什么。然而,很多同学一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”如果要表示“总是能够”的概念,很多同学提笔就会写canalways,但理想的句子应该是用双重否定表示强烈的肯定,用neverfailto。
注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。比如在正式文体的写作中,很少用“itisn’t”这样的略缩形式,而是“itisnot”。同理,在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写,阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
许多同学在写作文时,习惯于把“since”“because”“for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上,在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中,这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外,“and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头,表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实,经常留心地道的英语文章能发现,如果是并列关系,完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系,用“furthermore”“whatismore”更为普遍
Accordingto(根据)……题目大意……Ibelievethat(我认为)……你的观点2.Asfarasweknow(我们都知道)……题目大意……frommypointofview(我认为)……你的观点First(首先)……second(其次)……atlast(最后)……
First(首先)……andthen(然后)……inconclusion(最后,总之)Asfarasweknow(我们都知道)……moreover(而且,此外)……
specially(特别是)……inconclusion(最后,总之)表并列:similarly同样的/inthesameway以同样的方式表转折:however/but但是
表对比:notthat…butthat…不是…而是…/onehand….ontheotherhand一方面…另一方面…/unlike…与…不同/notsomuch….as…与其…不如…表目的:forthe……….为了…
表因果:therefore因此,所有/so所以表例证:forexample
例如
表假设:if如果表让步:although…虽然……(注意:后不可接but!虽然但是不可这样连用)/ofcourse当然…/clearly…显然…allinall(总的来说)……
byandlarge(总的来说)……+inmyopinion(我认为)……nomatterhow(不管怎样)……onthewhole(总的来说)◆相关过渡语
1).表示时间顺序:first,then,afterwards,meanwhile,later,firstofall,finally,atlast…2).表示空间顺序:near,nextto,farfrom,infrontof,ontheleft,ononeside…
3).表示比较、对照:like,unlike,suchas,but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,nevertheless,otherwise…
4).表示因果关系:because,for,asaresult,therefore,thus…
5).表示递进关系:besides,what’smore,whatwasworse,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,ontopof…
6).表示并列关系:and,aswellas,also…
7).表示总结性:ingeneral,inaword,inshort,onthewhole,tosumup,inbrief,toconclude1.occur替换thinkof
SuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.→Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.Itoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.2.devote替换spend
Hespendsallhissparetimeinreading.→Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.3.seek替换want/lookfor
Theysought(wanted)tohidethemselvesbehindthetrees.4.average替换ordinary
I’manaverage(ordinary)student.5.but替换very
Thefilmwesawlastnightwasveryinteresting.→Thefilmwesawlastnightwasnothingbutinteresting.Thefilmwesawlastnightwasanythingbutboring.6.seat替换sit
Onhiswaytoschool,hefoundanoldladyseated(sitting)bytheroad,lookingworried.7.suppose替换should
Heissupposedto(should)havedrivenmoreslowly.8.appreciate替换thank
Thankyouverymuchforyouhelp.→
Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch./Yourhelpismuchappreciated.9.thecase替换true
Idon’tthinkitisthecase(true).10.on替换assoonas
Assoonashearrived,hebeganhisresearch.→Onhisarrival,hebeganhisresearch..11.dueto替换becauseof
Hearrivedlatedueto(becauseof)thestorm.12.cover替换walk/read
Aftercovering(walking)10miles,weallfelttired.13.contributeto替换behelpful/useful
PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.→PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.14.roundthecorner替换comingsoon/nearby
①Thesummervacationisroundthecorner(coming).Doyouhaveanyplans?②LiMingstudiesinaschoolroundthecorner(nearby).15.cometolight替换discover
Thefamilyweresopleasedwhentheydiscoveredthelostjewels.→Thefamilyweresopleasedwhenthelostjewelscametolight.
16.haveaball替换haveagoodtime/enjoyoneself
Aftervisitingtheworkshop,wewentbacktoschool.Everyoneofushadaball(hadagoodtime).
17.comeupwith替换thinkof
Jackisveryclever.Heoftencomesupwith(thinksof)newideas.
18.setaside替换save
Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsetasidesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.(201*天津卷)
19.beof+n.替换adj.
Theproductsareofhighquality(verygood)andaresoldeverywhereinChina.20.referto替换talkabout/of,mention
Theprofessoryoureferredto(talkedabout)isveryfamous.21.cannotbut/cannothelpbut替换havetodoIcouldnotbut(hadto)gohome.22.moreoftenthannot替换usually
Moreoftenthannot(Usually),themeaningofmanywordscanbeeasilyguessed.23.lest替换sothat/inorderthat
IwrotedownhistelephonenumbersothatIwouldnotforgetit.→IwrotedownhistelephonenumberlestI(should)forgetit.
24.belongforsth./belongtodosth.替换wanttodosth./wishforIwanttoseeyouverymuch.→Iamlongtoseeyou.25.becaughtupin/becrazyabout/beabsorbedin/beaddictedto替换beinterestedinHeiscaughtupin(veryinterestedin)collectingstamps26.morethan替换very①I’mverygladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.→I’mmorethangladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.②IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,Iwouldbemorethangladtohelp27.perfect(ly)替换good/verywellHespeaksperfect(good)English./HespeaksEnglishperfectly(verywell).28.dosba/thefavor替换helpWouldyoupleasedomethefavor(helpme)toturndowntheradio?29.theotherday替换afewdaysagoTheotherdaymybrotherandIwenttothecinemabybicycle.30.inthecourseof替换duringInthecourseof(During)themountain-climbing,pleasehelpeachotherandpayspecialattentiontoyoursafety.31.themajorityof替换most32.consistof替换bemadeupofOurclassconsistsof(ismadeupof)50students.33.bewornout替换betired/broken①Afterfivehours’non-stopwork,wewereallwornout(tired).②Myshoesarewornout(broken).Pleasebuymeanewpair.34.becomeof替换happenWhatdothinkhasbecomeof(happenedto)him?35.attendto替换lookafter36.onconditionthat替换aslongas37.nevertheless替换however38.expressone’ssatisfactionwith替换besatisfiedwith39.sparenoeffo41.berushedoffone’sfeet替换bebusyindoing42.ahandfulof替换alittle/some43.meanwhile替换atthesametime44.gettoone’sfeet替换standup45.beneath替换under46.occasionally替换sometimes/onceinwhile47.forinstance替换forexample48.seldom替换notoften49.wealthy替换rich50.amazing替换surprising51.asamatteroffact替换infact
我从来不练单选,考试时最后做,把有把握的三四个写上,其他都蒙A.能对一半左右!要不然我得不了三分
扩展阅读:个人关于广东高考英文写作的总结
英语作文书面表达
Contents;
1.广东高考写作原则2.写作一般的步骤3.常用的过渡性词语
4.高考写作部分题型的写作模板5.高考写作常用的190点6.历年广东高考和模考范文一.广东高考写作遵循原则
1长短句原则(不显水平低,又易于理解)
基础写作尽量长句,读写任务长短句结合,因为便于理解有能体现能力。
2条理性强原则(写作要分段,显得有层次)3短语优先原则4多实少虚原则
二.写作步骤,写作时可以按自己的习惯,切勿形而上学
●高考英语作文完美行文四步骤STEP1:确定文章框架,包括:时态、语态、格式、展开方式、开头结尾等。STEP2:确定内容要点,包括:主要人物、时间地点、重要细节、合理发挥等。STEP3:正式开始写作,整理思路成篇,行文连贯。STEP4:检查全文,主要检查语法以及粗心犯下的错误。三.过渡性词语
表列举:forexample、forinstance、thatistosay、thisremindsmeofansimilarexperience..
表补充:besides、inaddition、moreover、additionally、furthermore、worsestill、what’smore
表对比:on(the)onehand…ontheotherhand,onthecontrary、
表原因:becauseof、thanksto、dueto、owingto、asaresultof、resultfrom表结果:therefore、thus、asaresult、so、Consequently
表结论:toconclude、inaword、inbrief、tosumup、inaword、insummary
表转折:however、nevertheless、yet
四.几个写作模板(主要是基础写作,可作参考,高考写作太多套话不见得好,基础弱的,
写作初期可以模仿)1.正反观点作文:
从正反两个方面来论证某一观点,对这类题型,时态一般用一般现在时。通常分为四个步骤来写:
第一段、文章开头,总述事件或情况
第二段、阐述提纲中列举的第一种看法,给出理由或者举例说明:主题句+理由第三段、阐述提纲中列举的第二种看法,给出理由或者举例说明:主题句+理由第四段、(视要求)表明自己的观点结束全文
模板Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat讨论主题.Buttheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.
Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat正观点.becausetheythink/insistthat支持理由However,otherswhois/areagainsttheopinionclaim/arguethat反对理由
AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat观点一或二.Itisnotonlybecause…,butalsobecause…./Themore…,themore…./Onlybydoing…can…例文(201*广一模基础写作:关于口语考试利弊,题目略):
Ladiesandgentlemen,insummaryourteamhasarguedthatthetestingofspokenEnglishisbothnecessaryandbeneficial.
MoststudentsagreethatithelpsthemdevelopthehabitsofreadingaloudandhavingconversationsinEnglishwhichinturnimprovestheirEnglishlevel.StudentscometorealizethatoralEnglishisasimportantasreadingandwriting.Inaddition,thespeakingtestpushesourteacherstofocusmoreonteachingspokenEnglish,makestheclassmoreinterestingandencouragesteacherstoimprovetheirownspokenlanguageskills.Nowadays,Englishisconsideredtobeagloballanguagesowecanuseittocommunicatewithpeoplefromothercountriesmoreeasily.Therefore,webelievethatmoreattentionshouldbegiventoteachingandlearningspokenEnglishandthiscanbedonebytestingspokenEnglish.2.利弊型作文
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)1.说明事物现状
2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3.你对现状(或前景)的看法利弊型作文模板一
NowadaysmanypeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificant/playsanimportantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First(A的优点之一).Besides(A的优点之二).
Butjustasapopularsayinggoes,nothingcanbeabsolutelyperfectorpurelyharmful.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat(A的第一个缺点).Tomakemattersworse,(A的第二个缺点).
Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo(我的看法)/Onlyinthisway,canwe….(对前景的预测).)
3.图表/图画题型作文:时态用一般现在时。
要求根据一幅图画(一般是一个或是两个,很少出现三副图的时候),一般而言:首先描述图表/图画的大致情况,然后对图画进行适当的阐释(解释、说明和分析),最后给出自己的建议、观点、原因等等。一般写三段。第一段、说明图表:主题句+图表说明1+图表说明2如,Asthediagram/chart/tableshows,……第二段、说明引起变化的原因
主题句+原因1+原因2+原因3如,Severalfactorscontributeto(原因1).And(原因2).Furthermore,(原因3).Alltheseresultin____.第三段、说明影响或者提出解决办法主题句+建议+前景预测模板:
Asisvividlyshowninthediagram(drawing/table)above,图画的整体内容Tobespecific,具体罗列数据和各内容
Theimpliedmeaningofthepictureshouldbetakenintoaccountseriously
thesocialproblem(如果是现象可以用phenomenon)hasarisenthegreatconcernofourwholesociety/thepublic.Tosolveit,具体罗列措施。例文:
根据图示,为报社写一篇关于我国交通事故的报告.
Thenumberofthetrafficaccidentsinourcountryhasbeengrowinginrecentyearswhichhasarisenthepeople’sconcern.Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,in201*thereoccurred570,000trafficaccidents,inwhich109,000peoplegotkilled.ByOctober201*,thenumberoftheaccidentsreached566,000resultingin95,600peoplelosingtheirlivesandtherateofthedeathsis22%thoughthenumberofthecarsmakesuponly2%ofthetotaloftheworld,whichmakingChinaacountrywiththehighestdeathrateoftrafficaccidentsintheworld.
Themainreasonwhysomanytrafficaccidentshavehappenedisthattheroadsaretoocrowdedandpeopleignoretrafficrules.Inordertoreducethetrafficaccidents,notonlyshouldthegovernmenttakesomepropermeasuressuchasdevelopingpublictrafficsbutalsopeopleshouldobeytrafficrules,especiallythedrivers.Withthemeasuresabove,wecanimprovethesituationwithlessaccidents.
4.英文信函题型
对这类题型,通常分为5个步骤来写:时态根据所写的具体内容来确定,写发生在过去的事情就用过去时,现在的就用现在时,将来的打算等用一般将来时)第一段、文章开头:称呼(通常已给出)第二段、寒暄语句,引出写信的目的:第三段、根据提纲扩展主体段落:主题句+扩展句1+扩展句2+扩展句第四段、表明自己的观点,并结束书信主体段落在最后要他谈自己的看法第五段、寒暄句+落款书信作文模板:
I’mwritingtoyoufor//toask…./I’mexcitedtolearnthat…(Iamextremelypleased//gladtohearfromyou//receiveyourlettersosoon//aftersuchalongtime.)AndIwouldliketowritealettertotellyouthat__.……(正文内容)
Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience///Iamlookingforwardto(yourrepliesatyourearliestconvenience//youearlyreply.)Bestregardsforyourhealthandsuccess.
Sincerelyyours,
xxx
五.高考作文中很好的190点(比较高级但老师又可以理解的词、短语、句我自己苦心
积累的,只选了190是因为太多不容易记住)
1.agrowingnumberof代替moreandmore2.虚荣,用conceited代替proud3多用nevertheless代替however
4butthisisnotalwaysthecase,凡事并不总是这样5垫脚石stepping-stone
例:Wecanregardthedifficultiesexistedinourdailylifeasthestepping-stonetooursuccess
6….are/isnotexception…也不是例外例:Encouragementmattersalot,greatfigures(著名人士)areexception,theyalwaysowetheirsuccesstoothers’encouragement.7blood/earthquakereliefwork抗洪/震救灾工作
8..ispopularwith/amongstudentswhilealsoreceivesrecommendation(赞扬)
fromteachersandparents.
9考试多用副词做连词.subsequently(接着,后来)、Consequently(结果)、theoretically(理论上讲)、alternatively(或者)、particularly、especially、definitely、largely…
例:thestreetisdirty,largelybecauseofcitizens’lowawarenessofenvironmentalprotection
10多用副词+形容词结构
increasinglygrowing、considerablybig/large、cautiouslyoptimistic….11.高级词汇要善用,但是切勿用太偏的。
12.poverty-hitarea贫穷地区、disaster-hitarea灾区(包括blood/drought/tsunami/volcano/typhoon-hitarea涝/旱/海啸/火山/台风袭击区13.outweigh比什么更重要
Advantagesoutweighdisadvantages利大于弊14.asisknowntoall,asweknow众所周知
15.bewell-knownathomeandabroad中外闻名16.Outperform好过,学习上超过。
例:BeijiangMiddleSchooloutperformsthefirstmiddleschoolofShaoguan.17.immeasurablepower
Belief/spiritcanproduceimmeasurablepower18.unconditionallove/无条件的爱
19.适当用haveapreferencefor代替like20.actingonasuddenimpulse一时冲动
21.考试优秀或名列前茅taketheleadinthestudy,comeouttopintheexam22.befacedwith/face
Beconfrontedwith面临什么的威胁例:Confrontedwithenvironmentpollution,weareboundtotakemeasurestodealwith24.resourcesexhaustion能源枯竭
25.tobespecific具体的,后面可以陈列数据例:Accordingtothesurvey,student’sprefertoidolizesingersratherthantheirparents,tobespecific,76%oftheadolescentssurveyedchoosesuperstarswhile24%appreciatetheirparentsorteachers。
26.用cherishthehopethat..代替havethehopethat..27.saywithoutexaggeration不夸张的说28.takeitforgrantedthat理所当然的认为
29.减压ease/lesson/relievethepressure/stress30.多用非谓动词作状语做基础写作开头;
例:为了提高学生的写作水平,学校计划这周末开设了作文比赛。一般:Theschoolplantoholdwritingcompetitiononthisweekendtoimprovestudents’skill.
升级:Aimingatraisingstudents’writinglevel,theschoolplantoholdawritingcompetitiononthisweekend。.31.beburdenedwith
例:Nowadays,studentsareburdenedwithalotofhomeworkwhichmakesstudentstayupverylate.
32.bycomparison,相较之下..incomparisonto..用于句中Oncomparison比较之下33.incontrast=onthecontraryBycontrast=bycomparison
34.combining/withourjointeffort通过我们的共同努力35.interpersonalrelationship人际关系
36.takeprecautionarymeasures/takeprecautions采取预防措施37.placeanemphasison/emphasize强调
38.asapopular/oldsayinggoes,正如某名言所说
例:asapopularsayinggoes,“actionsmustcorrespondwithword(言行一致)”39.franklyspeaking=tobehonest=honestlyspeaking老实说..40.decreace/reduceCO2emission(CO2排放量)41.Asfarasitgoes就现状而言
42.extracurricularbooks/activities课外书/活动43.whenitcomesto…谈及
例:Whenitcomestomath,mymindisempty.
44.可以用performwellin/becapableofdoing代替begoodat/dowellin表示擅长45.musterupcouragetodo鼓起勇气去做某事
例:Althoughlifeisasifaroadfilledwithdifficulties,weareboundtomusterupcouragetoovercomethem.
46.bridgethegenerationgap消除代沟47.makeanexcuseforsth为什么找借口
48.承接上文所讲asismentioned-above/stated-above,…49.freeone’simagination50.cultivate培养
Cultivatetheheartofgratitude/confidence/theabilityofindependence51.obstacle障碍
Comeacrossmanyobstaclesinlifeandstudy52.用demonstrate、illustrate代替prove
53.写作时先用了encourage,为了不过于重复用词,prompt也可用于表激励
54.adapt(oneself)to、adjustto+(newenvironment/lifestyle/climate)适应55.beacknowledgedas/beregardedas被认为..Acknowledge承认、供认57.needlesstosay毋需说
例:Needlesstosay,weallknowcollegeentranceexaminationplaysanimportantroleinourlife.
58.resorttodoing诉诸resorttoviolence诉诸武力59.Asismirrored/showedfromthegraph..从图表反映60.bejealous/enviousof..嫉妒
61.…istoone’staste,whilesbfavorsth..
62.nothingcanbeneitherabsolutelyperfectnorpurelyharmful没有绝对的好坏。代替“everycoinhastwosides老掉牙”63.amajorityof/amajorpartof…Majority多数minority少数名族
64.gotogreatlengthstodo=tryone’sbesttodo=exertone’sutmostefforttodosth
65.makestrenuousefforts做积极的努力
66.tothegeneralpublic/tothepopularmind大众看来67.sheltersbfromtroublesandhardships.68.benefitsblifelong让sb受益终身
69.focusonone’sstudywithoutdisattraction70.asizablepercentageof..很大比例的…71.getinto/formhabits养成习惯72.sureenough果然73.shoulder/takeresponsibilityfor/beresponsiblefor负责任
74.介绍自己观点:personallyspeaking、frommypointofview、inmyopinion、asfarasIamconcerned、forme、
75.多用have/getsthdone的结构
例:havesthpaid、getsthrepaired
76.onpurpose、intentionally、deliberatelyunintentional无意的77.briefintroduction简介
78.feel/beobligatedtodo不得不,觉得有义务做某事79.feel/beobligedtodo意思基本同78
80.同意approveof/beinfavorof/agreeonsth(注:agreewithsb)81.不同意beopposedto/beagainstto/objectto82.套句(凑字数)takingallthefactorsintoconsideration/account,wemayreasonablydrawtheconclusionthat…
83.comparativelyspeaking对比来说84.belostindeepthought陷入沉思85.提交submit代替hand
例:studentswhowanttoattendthespeechcontestshouldsubmittheirpersonalinformationtotheorganizingcommittee.
86.参加participatein/takepartin/attend/joinin
(有细微区别:参加会议用attend,加入Party(党)用joinin……)87.loseappetite没有胃口
88.broadenone’shorizon开阔视野
89.makesenseof理解=comprehendmakesense有意义90.做某事无意义
ThereisnopointindoingsthItdoesn’tmakesensetodosth91.remedialmeasures补救措施92.intensesports剧烈运动
93.attach(great)importance/significancetosth/doingsth认为什么重要/有意义.
94.traditionalvalues传统价值
95.overestimate高估underestimate低估96.expecttoomuchofsb对某人期待过高97.belocated/situatedin位于
98.studentunion/association学生会(多用前者)99.livealow-carbonlife过低碳生活100.withouthesitation毫不犹豫
101.经济的快速发展therapiddevelopmentofeconomy
102人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长theremarkableimprovement/steadygrowthof
people’slivingstandard
103.先进的科学技术advancedscienceandtechnology
104.面临新的机遇和挑战befacedwithnewopportunitiesandchallenges105.人们普遍认为Itiscommonlybelieved/recognizedthat…106.社会发展的必然结果theinevitableresultofsocialdevelopment
107.引起了广泛的公众关注arousewidepublicconcern/drawpublicattention108.不可否认Itisundeniablethat…/Thereisnodenyingthat…109.热烈的讨论/争论aheateddiscussion/debate110.有争议性的问题acontroversialissue111.完全不同的观点atotallydifferentargument
112.一些人…而另外一些人…Somepeople…whileothers…
113.就我而言/就个人而言AsfarasIamconcerned,/Personallyspeaking,114.就…达到绝对的一致reachanabsoluteconsensuson…115.有充分的理由支持besupportedbysound/abundantreasons116.双方的论点argumentonbothsides
117.发挥着日益重要的作用playanincreasinglyimportantrole/partin…118.正如谚语所说Astheproverbgoes/asanoldsayinggoes119.…也不例外…benoexception
120.对…产生有利/不利的影响have/exertpositive/negativeeffectson…121.利远远大于弊theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages。
122.导致,引起leadto/giveriseto/contributeto/resultin/accountfor123.负责任:takeresponsibilityfor/beresponsiblefor
124.复杂的社会现象acomplicated/complexsocialphenomenon125.责任感/成就感senseofresponsibility/senseofachievement126.竞争与合作精神sense/spiritofcompetitionandcooperation127.开阔眼界widen/broadenone’shorizon/vision128.获得知识和技能acquireknowledgeandskills
129.经济/心理负担financialburden/psychologicalburden130.考虑到诸多因素takemanyfactorsintoaccount/consideration131.从另一个角度fromanotherperspective/aspect132.做出共同努力makejointefforts(withjointeffort)
133.对…有益bebeneficialto/dogoodto
对…有害beharmfulto/dodamageto/doharmto134.为社会做贡献makecontributionstothesociety135.打下坚实的基础layasolidfoundation/basisfor…136.学生会studentunion/association137.无可非议thereisnodoubtthat
139.致力于/投身于bededicated/devotedto(doing/sth)…140.有限的自然资源:finitenaturalresources141.大范围地onabigscale
142.满足需求satisfy/meettheneedsof…143.可靠的信息源areliablesourceofinformation144.宝贵的自然资源valuablenaturalresources145.因特网theInternet(一定要由冠词,字母I大写)146.方便快捷convenientandefficient
147.在人类生活的方方面面inallaspectsofhumanlife
148.环保(的)environmentalprotection/environmentallyfriendly149.社会进步的体现asymbolofsocietyprogress
150.科技的飞速更新theincreasinglyupdatingofscienceandtechnology151.对这一问题持有不同态度holddifferentattitudestowardsthisissue152.支持前/后种观点的人people/thoseinfavoroftheformer/latteropinion
153.有/提供如下理由/证据have/providethefollowingreasons/evidenceThereareseveralreasonsasfollows154.在一定程度上tosomeextent/degree/insomeway155.理论和实践相结合integrate/connecttheorywithpractice156.…必然趋势anirresistibletrend/tendencyof…
157.日益激烈的社会竞争theincreasinglyfiercesocialcompetition158.眼前利益immediateinterest/short-terminterest159.长远利益.interestinthelongrun/long-terminterest
160.…有其自身的优缺点…hasitsmeritsanddemerits/advantagesanddisadvantages161.扬长避短showone’sfavorableaspectsandavoidunfavorableones162.取其精髓,取其糟粕Taketheessenceanddiscardthedregs。163.对…有害doharmto/beharmfulto
164.交流思想/情感/信息exchangeideas/emotions/information
165.跟上…的最新发展keeppacewith/catchupwiththelatestdevelopmentof(society/technology/science…)
166.采取有效措施来…takeeffectivemeasurestodosth167.…的健康发展thehealthydevelopmentof…
168.有利有弊Everycoinhasitstwosides。(有点out了。不用了)Nogardenwithoutweeds。
169.对…观点因人而异Views/Opinionson…varyfrompersontoperson。170.重视/认为…有意义attachgreatimportance/significanceto…171.社会地位socialstatus
172.把时间和精力放在…上focustimeandenergyon…
173.扩大知识面expandone’sscopeofknowledge/enrichone’sknowledge
174.身心两方面bothphysicallyandmentally
175.有直接/间接关系bedirectly/indirectlyrelatedto…
176.可以取代“think”的词believe,claim,maintain,argue,insist,holdtheopinion/beliefthat
177.缓解压力/减轻负担relieve/lesson/easestress/burden179.优先考虑/发展…give(top)prioritytosth。180.与…比较comparedwith…/incomparisonwith181.相反incontrast/onthecontrary。182.代替replace/substitute/taketheplaceof183.采取预防措施:takeprecautions/takeprecautionarymeasures184.提供就业机会offerjobopportunities185.社会进步的反映mirrorofsocialprogress186.毫无疑问Undoubtedly,/Thereisnodoubtthat…187.增进相互了解enhance/promotemutualunderstanding188.充分利用makefulluseof/takeadvantageof
189.强调placeanemphasison/emphasize190.对比来说comparativelyspeaking
六.历年的高考作文题和范文(范文是学习写作和积累表达法的最好模板,下面范文均是
这几年的高考范文。。如基础写作涉及:活动介绍、人物简介、演讲稿、产品投诉、调查结果等等类型。。)
基础写作:
1.07年广东省高考基础写作
上周,我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题,在2600名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据:
偶像(idol)伟人父母影视明星体育明星没有偶像
[写作内容]
根据以上数据,写一篇短文,包括以下内容:
1.调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象;2.男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异;3.“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异;4.男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同;5.你的偶像及理由。[写作要求]
1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
女生18%25%50%6%1%男生18%11%14%48%9%Onepossibleversion
Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentsonthe“whoisyouridol“ThesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsasidols,while48%oftheboysfiguresportsstars.Asthedatashows,“parents”ranksthesecondforthegirls,butthefortheboys.However,thepercentageoftheboyschoosing“greatfigures”isthesameasthatofthegirls.Asformyself,ThomasEdisonismyidolbecausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife.
2.08年广东高考基础写作
你很荣幸地成为201*北京奥运会的一名志愿者,负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。
请根据以下中文提纲,编写射击项目的英语介绍:背景:射击最初只是生存工具,19世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。1896:第一次成为奥运项目1904:中断1928:中断1932:重回奥运会1968:第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状:稳步发展,1896奥运会只有三项射击项目,现今有17项。范文VersionIShooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury.Thesportfirstappearedin1896,butnonewerecontestedduringthe1904and1928games.ThesportreturnedtotheOlympicsin1932.WomenwerefirstallowedtocompeteintheOlympicshootingin1968.Thesporthasgrownsteadilyfromjustthreeshootingeventsatthe1896Olympics,andnowthereareseventeenventsinall.
Version2
Itwasnotuntilattheendof19thcenturythatshooting,originatedasameansofsurvival,earneditsstatusasasport.ShootingbecameanOlympiceventofficiallyin1896.Yet,twiceinhistory(1904,1928)shootingwas
suspendedattheOlympics.ItreturnedtotheGamesin1932,andwomenwerefirstallowedtoparticipateinthecompetitionin1968.Thesporthasbeengrowingsteadilyfrom1896’sthreeeventstotoday’sseventeen.
3.09年广东省高考基础写作
你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:时间:上周末对象:眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授主题:我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题基本信息:(1)发生率:略高于50%(2)人数:世界第一专家解读:(1)原因:很复杂(2)治疗:没有哪一种药物能治愈近视(3)建议:不要过度用眼;多参加户外活动(4)特别提示:如何握笔也和近视有关[写作内容]
根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,并包括如下内容:1.采访的时间、对象和主题;2.中小学生近视的发生率及人数;3.专家解读。
【答案】Lastweekend,Ihadaninterviewwitheye-doctorProfessorWangaboutourcountryprimaryandmiddlestudents’short-sightedness.Itissaidthatslightlymorethan50%students,whichrankstheNo.1intheworld,areshort-sighted.ProfessorWangsaidthereasonofshort-sightednessiscomplicatedandthreeisstillnocureforshort-sightedness.Hesuggestedthatweshouldnotoveruseoureyesanddomoreoutdoorexercises.What’smore,sincetheholdingofpenhassomethingtodowiththeshort-sightedness,weneedtopayattentiontousingthepen.
4.201*广东卷基础写作
以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。内容:公共场所禁烟实施时间:201*年1月1日起实施范围:全国目标:所有室内公共场所无烟措施:张贴禁烟标志相关数据:(1)吸烟人数:约3.5亿(2)分布:男性75%;女性:25%(3)受二手烟影响人数:约5.4亿(4)因二手烟死亡人数:超过10万/年二手烟:second-handsmoke[写作内容]
请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,内容包括:1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围;2.目标和措施;3.相关数据。[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
【参考范文】
ChinabeginstocarryoutthepolicytopreventsmokinginpublicbuildingssinceJanuary1st,201*.Themainaimistomakeeverypublicroomshavenosmokebypostingthesignofnosmoking.Thereare350millionpeoplesmokingrecently,inwhichthemalehold75percentandthefemalehold25percent.Becauseofthesesmokers,about540millionnon-smokersareinfluenced.Morethan100thousandpeopleperyeardiebecauseofthesecondsmoke.
5.基础写作(品牌MP3出故障)
【写作内容】
假设你是李华,你新买的某外国品牌MP3出了故障,现你写信到其公司反映问题。
1.购买日期:上个月;
2.故障:一周前屏幕坏了,看不见显示内容;3.已跟当地销售商家投诉,但其不能解决;
4.要求:更换一台新的,如不行则要求退货、拿回货款。【写作要求】
1.必须使用5个规范的英语句子表达全部的内容。2.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。
3.开头和结尾已为你写好(不算入要求的5句话里)。DearSirorMadam,
Thanksforyourattention.I’mwritingtocomplainaboutyourproduct.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
LiHua
DearSirorMadam,
Thanksforyourattention.I’mherewritingtocomplainaboutyourproduct.Lastmonth,IboughtanMP3madebyyourcompany,whichbroughtmeenjoymentforsometime.Butlastweek,somethingwentwrongwiththescreenandIcan’tseeanythingonit.IhavetalkedaboutthiswiththeshopwhichsoldmethisMP3,butthey/itcouldn’tdoanythingaboutit.Havingnochoice,Iturntoyouforhelp.Ihopeyoucangetmeanewoneorreturnmymoneytome.
I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
LiHua
6.基础写作(介绍你英语写作的方法和心得)
学习方法学习效果[写作内容]你的英语老师要求你在班上用英文向同学们介绍你英语写作的方法和心得。请根据下表提供的中文提纲,选择相关的信息写一篇发言稿。背诵范文多阅读英文文章多听英文广播学习语法多写日记多练习口语参考他人的习作[写作要求]1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.开头与结尾已经给出。
[评分标准]句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。Ladiesandgentlemen,
NowIwouldliketotellyouhowIlearnEnglishwriting.
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------That’sall.Thankyou.
运用英语思维,进行模仿性写作吸取语言材料提高听力水平正确表达在做中学提高口头技能取长补短Ladiesandgentlemen,
NowIwouldliketotellyouhowIlearnEnglishwriting.
Firstly,Ioftenrecitegood/beautifulEnglisharticles,whichhelpsmethinkinEnglishwhenIimitateEnglishwriting.Secondly,IalsoreadEnglisharticleswidelysothatIcantakeinasmanylanguagematerialsaspossible.Thirdly,inordertoexpressmyselfcorrectly/makemyselfunderstood,Ithinkthattheyareimportanttoforuslearnaboutsomegrammar,listentotheradioandpracticespeakingEnglishalot.Fourthly,IkeepadiaryeverydaysothatIcanlearnbywriting.Besides/Inaddition,Ioftenrefertoothers’articlestoknowwhatIneedandwhatIcanlearnfromothers.That’sall.Thankyou.
7.基础写作介绍学徐霞客
请根据以下提示,写一篇介绍我国明代著名地理学家徐霞客的文章。
1.出生年代:15872.著作:徐霞客游记
3.事迹:徐霞客一生周游考察了十六个省,足迹几乎遍及全国。为了进行真实细致的考察,他很少乘车坐船,而对边远的山区、人迹稀疏、稀少的森林进行考察,发现了许多奇山秀景。4.评价:对我国地理学发展做出了重大的贡献。【写作要求】
1,只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯
Onepossibleversion:
XuXia-ke
XuXia-ke,afamousgeographerinMingdynasty,wasbornin1587.Inorderto
completehisgreatworkTravelsofXuXia-ke,duringhislifetime,XuXia-kehadtraveledandstudiedthegeographicalconditionsof16provinces,havinglefthisfootprintsalmostalloverthelandofChina.Inordertomakeacloseandrealisticstudyofthegeographicalconditions,heseldomtraveledbywagonorboat,butalmostdidallthetravelingonfoot.Byvisitingsomeremotemountainsandlittle-traveledforests,hehaddiscoveredwonderfulmountainsandattractivespots.HeisconsideredtohavemadeagreatcontributiontothedevelopmentofChinesegeography.
8.基础写作(简介广东)
【写作内容】请根据以下的情景说明写一篇短文,必须使用5个规范的
英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容,短文内容要准确、连贯、完整。假如你是一名导游,你将带领一个外国旅游团游览广东省。
地理:广东位于中国大陆最南部,南临南海,海岸线总长3368公里,岛屿众多。历史:广东历史悠久,简称粤。.
特点:1.素有水果王国之称,香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝、菠萝为其四大名果;
2.是华南工业发达之省,水陆交通便利,海运发达;3.经济特区有深圳、珠海、汕头等;4.有“食在广东”的美称。.
注:1、短文的开头和结尾已写好,不计入句子数。
2、参考词汇:海岸线coastline;甘蔗sugarcane;荔枝lychee;
菠萝pineapple;经济特区specialeconomiczones。
[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准]句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
Onepossibleversion:LadiesandGentlemen,WelcometoGuangdongProvince.I’mWangQian.AndI’mmorethangladtobeyourguide.GuangdongProvince,alsocalledYueforshort,hasalonghistoryandisknownforthesaying,“Don’thesitatetohavemealshere.”LocatedbytheSouthSeainthesoutheastpartofmainlandChina,ithasquiteafewislandsoffitscoastlinewhichhasatotallengthof3,368kilometres.Knownasafruitking,GuangdongProvinceisfamousforitshigh-qualitybananas,sugarcane,lycheesandpineapples.ItisalsooneofthemostdevelopedindustrialprovincesinSouthChina,withconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater.IthasseveralspecialeconomiczonessuchasShenzhen,Zhuhai,Shantouandsoon.
Finally,Isincerelyhopeeveryoneofyouwillenjoyyourselfhere.
任务型写作:
07年广东省高考任务型写作
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。DearAri,
Asyousleepinmyarms,I"mamazedathowlightyoufeel.Istareatyourtinybody,sofragilethatasuddenwindcouldliftyouupintotheair.IlovethisfeelingofprotectingyouanddreamingofallIhaveinstoreforyou.
Iintendtobringyouuptobebraveandsuccessfulinanoftendifficultsociety.That"swhyyourmommyandIhavenamedyouAri,whichmeans"lion".It"sourhopethatyouwillgrowstrongandeagerlygraspeveryopportunitytodowellforyourselfandothers.
Beforeyoucameintotheworld,wehadspentmonthsimaginingwhatyou"dbelike.Wouldyoubeaboyoragirl?WouldyoulooklikeMommy,Daddyoryourelderbrothers?Anyway,wewouldfindoutsoon.Finallyyourmother"slaborcame.Andseveralhourslater,wemetthefirsttime.Iheldyouhighupintheair.Ithenwasabletocutyourumbilicalcord(脐带)andputyouinyourmother"sarms.Shestillhadenoughenergytoradiatethelovewhileshepressedyoutoherface.
Andherewearetonight.AsIholdyouclose,yousleepsopeacefully.Ipressmyeartoyourchestandhearyourstrength.Iamlisteningtothefirstbeatsofalion"sheart.Welcometotheworld,Ari.
Love,Daddy
[写作内容]
假设你就是信中的Ari,父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日,你准备以写信的方式,祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好):1.以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望;
2.以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩,并包括如下要点:
(1)读信后的感受;
(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受;(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。[写作要求]
1.作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Onepossibleversion
DearDaddy,
Tonightisyour50thbirthday,andIhaven’treallygotthechancetosayallofmythanksIwanttotellyou.IreadyourletteryouwrotetomewhenIwasborn18yearsago.Yougavemethename“Ari”andhopedIwouldbebraveandresponsibletothesociality.Iwassomovedbyyourdeepestlovetome.AndIloveyoutooDaddy.
WhenIwasaprimaryschoolstudent,youalwaysencouragedmetodowellinschoolandeacheveningIwasaskedtopresentatleastonenewthingIhadlearnedthatday.YoutoldmethatIcouldbewhateverIwantedtobe,aslongasIgotgoodgradesandcontinuedmyeducation.WhenImetsomedifficulties,youinspiredmetofaceitbravelyandsolveitbymyownbrightnessandeffort.
Thanksforsupportingmeoverthelast18yearsofmylife.Thanksforalltheadviceandknowledgeovertheyears.Thanksforshowingme,thatevenyou,arenotperfect.Thankdad,Iwishyouahealthybodyandahappylife.
08年作文广东高考任务型写作
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Hi,IamMike.Ijustwentthroughmyfirstyearofcollege.Thetoughestpartonmeatfirstwasthegeneraladjustment.1wenttoaverysmallhighschoolwheremymomwasateacherandshedidpracticallyeverythingforme.ButatthecollegeIneededtoknowsomebasiclifeskills.suchasbalancingacheckbook,laundry,andthethingsyouhavetobeabletohandlethatIneverthoughtofinthehighschool!ItwasreallytoughformeatfirstandIgotbadlyhomesick.
OncethatfirstsemesterwasoverandIgotusedtothecollegelife,Iloveditgoodfacilities,helpfulinstructors.andagoodlibrary.TheStudents’Unionorganizesvariouspartieseveryweek.Ialsogotocinemasandconcerts,andoftenspendSaturdaynightsinpubsandclubs.
OnethingIthinkisimportantistogetyourselfactiveinthings.Iwasonthedanceteamincollegeandmetatonofpeoplethatwayitwassomucheasiertomakefriendswhenyouhadacommonground.
[写作内容]
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动,你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后,你准备写一份发言稿,题目是“PreparingMyselfforCollegeLife”,内容要点包括:1.以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点;
2.然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活,内容包括:(1)对中学生活的感受;(2)理想的大学生活;
(3)中学生活和大学生活的差别,以及你打算如何适应。[写作要求]
1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。Onepossibleversion:
PreparingMyselfforCollegeLife
Atfirst,Mikedidn’tgetusedtothecollegelife,butafterthefirstsemester,helovedhislifethere.Hethinksit’ssignificanttobeactiveineverything.
Inthehighschool,Iamalwayscontrolledbyschoolandparents.Ican’twatchTVorgoouttoplay.Instead,Imuststudyhardtopassthecollegeentranceexamination.Lifeisboring.SoIdreamtogotocollege,becausewhenIamthere,Igetfreefrommyparents.IcandowhatIliketodo,suchassurfingtheInternet,goingshopping,playingbasketballandsoon.
ButasfarasIamconcerned,boringaslifeinhighschoolis,it’scomfortable,becauseIcangohomeandgettogetherwithmyfamilyeveryday.Mymotheralwaystakesgoodcareofme.IfIgotocollege,I’llfeelhomesickandmaybeeverythingisdifficulttomeatfirst.However,IbelieveIcanconqueralldifficulties.Incollege,Iwilltakepartintheactivitiesandmakefriendsasmanyaspossible.I’msureI’lllivebetterincollege,eveninsociety.
09年作文广东高考任务型写作
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Jackieisperhapsthemosteasilyannoyedkoala(考拉)attheFeatherdaleWildlifeParkinsouthernAustralia.Allthekoalasthereareunhappyandcomplaining.Youwouldbetooifyouwereusedtonightactivitiesandsomeonekeptwakingyouupalldaywhileyouweretryingtosleepitoff.That’srightsleepitoff.Theaveragekoalaisalwayshalfasleepbecauseitfeedsontheleavesofaspecialkindthatmakesitsleepy.
ThereasonJackieandherfellowkoalasarerepeatedlyawokenfromtheirdeepsleepissotheycanbehuggedandphotographedbytourists,whomakethetripstoFeatherdaleandanincreasingnumberofothernationalparksforjustthatspecialexperience.WhateverdepartmentintheAussiegovernmentinchargeofsuchthingsisnowmovingtomakethepracticeillegal,whichisunderstandable.Howwouldyoureact,myfriend,ifyouweretryingtosleepoffadozentimesandsomeround,furrycreaturesmellingofgrasskeptwakingyou?
*考拉即树袋熊[写作内容]
1.以约30个词概括这段短文的内容;
2.然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论,内容包括:(1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照;(2)假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应;(3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。[写作要求]
1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Onepossibleversion:
Thepassagenarratesthatkoalaswhoarerepeatedlyawokenfromtheirdeepsleepareunhappyandcomplainingfortouriststakingphotos.Theauthorappealstoustobemorekindtoanimals.
Thereasonswhytouristsliketakingphotosoftheanimalsinthezooperhapsvaryfrompeopletopeople.Somethinkitahappyreminderoftheirvisittothezooortheanimals,whileothersmayconsideritjustsortoffuntohave.Butanywaytheymaynotsharethedeepfeelingsoftheanimals.
IfIwereinthesamepositionastheanimalinthezoo,myreactionwouldbeveryseverestronglyagainstbeingphotographed.Nohavingpeacefulsurroundingstosleep,don’tyousufferrestlessandfidgets.Nodoubtwedoandsodotheanimals.
Ithinkitnecessarytobantourists’takingpictureswithanimals,makingacomfortableenvironmentforthemtoliveandregardingthemasourfriends,soastofoundharmoniousrelationswithanimals.
201*年作文广东高考任务型写作
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Injuniorhighschool,oneofmyclassmates,Ethan,wasaddictedtoTV.ThisboysimplykneweverythingaboutsuchpopshowsasWho’stheBoss?
ThenonedayEthan’smothermadehimanofferinordertodrawhimbacktohisschoolsubjects.Shepromisedthatshewouldgivehim$200ifhecouldgoafullmonthwithoutwatchinganyTV.NoneofusthoughtEthancoulddoit,buthedidquitTV.Hismompaidhim$200.HewentoutandboughtaTV,thebiggesthecouldfind.Inrecentyears,hundredsofschoolshavecarriedoutexperimentswithpayingkidswithcashfor
showinguporgettinggoodgrades.Allschoolkidsadmirethistrend.Butitupsetsadults.Teacherssaythatwearerewardingkidsfordoingwhattheyshouldbedoingoftheirownwill.Psychologistswarnthatmoneycanactuallymakekidsperformworsebymakingtheactoflearningcheap.Thedebatehasbecomeatypicalbattleoverwhyourkidsarenotlearningattheratetheyshouldbedespitedecadesofreformsandbudgetincreases.
[写作内容]
1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论,内容包括:(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法:
(2)你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的;(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中
的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。[评分标准]
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。参考范文
【读写任务优秀范文选登1】
Whatshouldpeoplereallydoencouragetheirkidstoconcentratetheirtimeandenergyonstudyinglessonsanddoingwell?People’sopinionsdifferfromeachotheraboutthisproblem.
Somesclools,teachersandparentsgivetheirstudentsorkidsmoneyasastimulatingmeansinordertoencouragethemtodowhattheyshoulddoeffectively,thisphenomenoniscommoninrecentyearsanditiswelcomebymostoftheyoung.Idon’tthinkitisaneffectiveway,onthecontraryitmayleadtotheoppositeresult.
MyparentsandfamilyoftentellmesomeencouragingstoriesinancientormoderntimessuchasLiBai,ZhouEnlaiandsoon.EachtimeImakealittleprogressinmystudy,theyalwaysparisemewithopenarms,andwhenenerIamcomfrontedwithdifficultiesmyfamilyalwaysstandmyside.Ifeelcomfortableandwarminmyheartforwhattheydoforme.ImakeupmymindthatI’llliveuptomyfamilyandmyhomeland.
Ithink,asastudentmyself,schoolandparentsshouldeducatetheirkidsthroughteachingthemtostudyfortheirfamilyandtheirmotherlandratherthangivingthemmoneytoletrthempassivelydosomething.Onlybybuildingupsomenobleandlong-rangeaimscantheystudyontheirowninitiative.
【读写任务优秀范文选登2】
Thepassageismainlyaboutparentsgivemoneytotheirchildrensothat
theycanshowuporgetgoodgradesrecentlybythewayoftakingtheexampleofEthanandhismother.
Ethan’smotherfailedtostopEthanwatchingTVbyrewardinghimwith
cash.Thiskindofactioniscommon,andevenbecomeatrend,whichisconcernedbymanyadults.
FormwhereIstand,Iamnotinfavorofencouragingkidswithcashjust
becausetheyhavegotgoodmarks.
Myparentsusedtoencouragemelikethis.WheneverImadeprogressinmy
studies,theyboughtmemyfavouritebooks,whichnotonlymadememotivatedtolearn,butalsohelpedmegetalongwellwithmystudies.
Togetkidsmotivatedtolearn,Ithinkweshouldnottreateverychildinthe
sameway.Tosomestudents,oralpraiseisessential.Don’tsavethepraiseforonlythetopscore.Ifpossible,involveotheradultsinpraisingthem.However,thismethodmaynotworkwellwithotherkids.Maywhatismoreimportanttothemistowatchamovieorgoonatriptogetherwiththeirparents.Itjustdepends.
201*广一模任务型写作
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen.ThisisLiHuafromSeniorThree.I’mheretodaytosharewithyouagoodlessonfromanoverseasChinesestudentlivinginGermany.Itisatruestory.
Afteryearsofhardwork,thisChinesestudentgraduatedwithamazingacademicachievements.Everyonethoughthewasgoingtogetagoodjobeasilyandhaveabrightfuture.Buttohisdisappointment,hewasgoingtogetagoodjobeasilyandhaveabrightfuture.Buttohisdisappointment,hewasnotevenallowedthechanceforaninterview!Thethirdtimehewasturneddown,hecouldn’thelptelephoningthecompanytoaskwhytheydidn’twanthim.Theanswerwassimple,“Wedon’thiredishonestpeopleinGermany.”
Whatwaswrongyoumightwonder?Thetruthis,shortlyafterhearrivedinGermany,thiscleverstudentfoundthatitwaseasytoskipbuyingsubwaytickets.So,tosavemoney,heoftenwentwithoutaticket.Asaresult,hehadbeencaughtwithoutaticketinthesubwaythreetimes.
Frothisstory,welearnthatwemaygetshort-termbenefitsbydishonestmeans,butthetruthwillcomeoutsoonerorlaterandthecostishigh.Soremember:honestyisthebestpolicy.
That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括这篇演讲稿的主要内容;
2.然后以约120个词写一篇读后感,说明“诚信的重要性”,内容包括:(1)你读后的感受;(2)以你或他人的经历说明;(3)谈谈你从中悟出的道理。【写作要求】
1.在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯范文
201*年广州二模任务型写作
范文:
第二节读写任务Version1
Inthepassagethewriterusesthestoryoftheaward-winningfarmerwhoshareshisbestcornseedwithhisneighbourstoteachusthatweallcanbenefitwhenweco-operateandsharewitheachother.
It’sareallyinstructivestory,whichinspiresmetothinkmore.Inourdailylife,wefaceallkindsofdifficulties.Everyoneneedshelpandonlythosewhoarereadytohelpcangethelpfromothers.
Takeglobalandregionalcooperationforexample.Asweknow,countriesareincreasinglyinterdependent.Whentheyworktogethertosolvetheirproblemstheworldbecomesmorestable.Tradeandtheeconomyimprovesandlivingstandardsforallincrease.Butifcountriesactselfishly,itwillcreatedistrust,pooreconomicandtraderelationsandmayevenleadtounrestandwar,whichhurtsthepeopleofallnations.Ifallthecountriescancooperatewitheachother,drawoneachother’sstrengthsandworktogether,theworldwilladvancegreatlyandallthenationswillsharebenefitsandprofitfrombalanceddevelopment.
Version2
Inthepassagethewriterusesthestoryoftheaward-winningfarmerwhoshareshisbestcornseedwithhisneighbourstoteachusthatweallcanbenefitwhenweco-operateandsharewitheachother.
It’sareallyinstructivestory,whichinspiresmetothinkmore.Inourdailylife,wefaceallkindsofdifficulties.Everyoneneedshelpandonlythosewhoarereadytohelpcangethelpfromothers.
TakeforexampletherecenttragedyinJapan.Theearthquakeandtsunamihavecausedgreatdamagetothatcountry.Mostseriousisthedamagetothenuclearpowerstationthathascausedradiationtoleakintotheatmosphere.Ifcountriesactselfishlyanddon’thelptheJapanese,notonlywillthelocalpeoplesuffer,buttheproblemsofradiationmayspreadtoaffecttherestofus.Butifweallco-operateandhelpeachother,thentheproblemcanhopefullybesolved,whichwillbeofbenefitnotonlytotheJapanesepeople,buttotherestoftheworldaswell.
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